Football - A Novel
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Oh, this was cute, Barbara. Kinda like a couple of shy teenagers, wanting to say and do more, but afraid of where it might lead and who might care. Thanks for the smile. Well done. Happy Mother's Day to you too.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Oh, this was cute, Barbara. Kinda like a couple of shy teenagers, wanting to say and do more, but afraid of where it might lead and who might care. Thanks for the smile. Well done. Happy Mother's Day to you too.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Katherine and Gabriel are slooowlly coming around. LOL It keeps the reader rooting for them. Nicely written and of course a joy to read. Have a great day, Barbara. Smiles, Carol
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Katherine and Gabriel are slooowlly coming around. LOL It keeps the reader rooting for them. Nicely written and of course a joy to read. Have a great day, Barbara. Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
And happy Mother's Day to you. I think Gabriel is the one who's showing sense her. This seems a fairly small community, and gossip can travel fast. Frost might not be the only one who tries to make trouble. I don't envy Katherine with her coaching burden. She has enough to worry about, and will probably be criticized if her girls don't win. Interesting details about her pre-race plans. She shouldn't try to live up to Gabriel's expectations, but that seems to be what she's doing. I hope she'll decide for herself what her capacities are. judi
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And happy Mother's Day to you. I think Gabriel is the one who's showing sense her. This seems a fairly small community, and gossip can travel fast. Frost might not be the only one who tries to make trouble. I don't envy Katherine with her coaching burden. She has enough to worry about, and will probably be criticized if her girls don't win. Interesting details about her pre-race plans. She shouldn't try to live up to Gabriel's expectations, but that seems to be what she's doing. I hope she'll decide for herself what her capacities are. judi
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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I think she eventually will. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY, BARBARA!
And this is a kind of feel-good chapter, with a little verbal sparring between Katherine and Gabriel, but nothing serious. You're keeping everyone 'in character' with just a trace of tension when it comes to matters of coaching. That's good, I think. And you tease the reader with those little under-the-breath words of affection right at the end ... which, of course, Gabriel hears. I tell ya, things is heatin' up!
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HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY, BARBARA!
And this is a kind of feel-good chapter, with a little verbal sparring between Katherine and Gabriel, but nothing serious. You're keeping everyone 'in character' with just a trace of tension when it comes to matters of coaching. That's good, I think. And you tease the reader with those little under-the-breath words of affection right at the end ... which, of course, Gabriel hears. I tell ya, things is heatin' up!
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Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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LOL Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
Girl, you are something else. A. Christy in the now. You have a certain way of blending hidden romantic thoughts into mystery. Watch out for the Shadow; he knows everything. Good one, Barb. Happy Mother's Day.
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Girl, you are something else. A. Christy in the now. You have a certain way of blending hidden romantic thoughts into mystery. Watch out for the Shadow; he knows everything. Good one, Barb. Happy Mother's Day.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
Aww, I love the little comment Katherine made toward the end. She's falling for him most definitely, which I'M VERY HAPPY ABOUT!!! Gabriel and Katherine are fine together, nothing inappropriate has happened, so I would say they're blessed and highly favored. Did notice one typo: "I'm fine. I didn't sleep very well last night(?")
Can't wait to read the next chapter! HAPPY MOTHER"S DAY!!!
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Aww, I love the little comment Katherine made toward the end. She's falling for him most definitely, which I'M VERY HAPPY ABOUT!!! Gabriel and Katherine are fine together, nothing inappropriate has happened, so I would say they're blessed and highly favored. Did notice one typo: "I'm fine. I didn't sleep very well last night(?")
Can't wait to read the next chapter! HAPPY MOTHER"S DAY!!!
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you for the catch. I rewrote that part as I posted and still got it wrong. My first edition was way too wordy. I appreciate the help.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story and if I'm not mistaken I think I recognise a budding romance. And why not? It seems such a natural outcome. Now what happening next? All best, Ulla:)))
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Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to the story and if I'm not mistaken I think I recognise a budding romance. And why not? It seems such a natural outcome. Now what happening next? All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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I think maybe there is a budding romance, but not without issues. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Leann DS
Good chapter. Nice dialogue. I have a question though... I'm not sure if I just did not read this chapter or if I just don't remember it because I was so overwhelmed with just joining fan story, but what is the problem with Gabe dating Catherine? Why can't they date or be seen together? That has been bothering me for a while. LOL
Happy Mother's Day to you, too! Hugs and happy day.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Good chapter. Nice dialogue. I have a question though... I'm not sure if I just did not read this chapter or if I just don't remember it because I was so overwhelmed with just joining fan story, but what is the problem with Gabe dating Catherine? Why can't they date or be seen together? That has been bothering me for a while. LOL
Happy Mother's Day to you, too! Hugs and happy day.
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Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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A former teacher, he was fired, accused Katherine of getting this teaching job because she slept with everybody, the principal and Gabriel and now allegedly hired a PI to prove it. Gabriel is a former pro-football player who had many beautiful models and wild parties. He's repented.
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Yes! I do remember that now. I don't know why I could not recall. Now that you said it, I feel kind of dumb. Thanks for telling me.
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Not a problem. I do completely understand.
