Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What an interesting image and thought behind it in your 575. Good job with your syllable count per line. I like the subtle alliteration--it doesn't get in the way of enjoyment of your well chosen words--the g is obvious a is there a bit. Best wishes.

Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks, Jan

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are sad, thought provoking and creative. I am still
pondering on the words and theme of this poem! The first two lines
flow and connect well. The last lines says it all. The artwork is perfect
and goes well with these words. Hope you are doing well.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thank you, Harmony

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

There's a great sense of foreboding achieved here with your combination of picture and poem. The grim reaper appears in many forms. Seldom welcome, but inevitable.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks, Tony, for giving this a look.