The Vision
Can you see it?24 total reviews
Comment from Gregory Lambert
This is a very nice poem, obviously written from the heart. I like the different rhyme scheme used for each stanza and repeating the first and fourth lines of the poem at the end is a nice touch. A well constructed poem, indeed!
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reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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This is a very nice poem, obviously written from the heart. I like the different rhyme scheme used for each stanza and repeating the first and fourth lines of the poem at the end is a nice touch. A well constructed poem, indeed!
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Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Gregory,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Collins Mlamba
I see it vividly painted in the words of your poem.
'Belief is knowing He's in control.'
That vision is the hope of everyone whose life is hid in Christ. And once the vision is clear, then nothing down here can dim the believer's spirit.
Thank you for posting.
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reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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I see it vividly painted in the words of your poem.
'Belief is knowing He's in control.'
That vision is the hope of everyone whose life is hid in Christ. And once the vision is clear, then nothing down here can dim the believer's spirit.
Thank you for posting.
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Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Collins,
Thanks so much for your review and kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Wonderful poem, full of faith, reminding us that the Coming of Christ is drawing nearer with every day!
Suggested revision:
Christ glorious return
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Christ's glorious return
I love your description, above the title:
"Can you see it?
The Vision"
What a great encouragement!
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Wonderful poem, full of faith, reminding us that the Coming of Christ is drawing nearer with every day!
Suggested revision:
Christ glorious return
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Christ's glorious return
I love your description, above the title:
"Can you see it?
The Vision"
What a great encouragement!
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Mary Kay,
Good Morning,
Thank you for your review and very uplifting comments.
Thanks for bringing the error to my attention.
Thanks, sweetie, for the six stars.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Hugs and much love...Portia
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You're very welcome, my sister, Portia. May God give you a very blessed day, as well!
Hugs and love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! I loved "Belief is knowing He is in control." That is what we need to anchor ourselves in when we are in the storms of life. And you said it so beautifully, Portia! Thanks you!
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Amen! I loved "Belief is knowing He is in control." That is what we need to anchor ourselves in when we are in the storms of life. And you said it so beautifully, Portia! Thanks you!
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Good Morning Sweet Helen,
Thanks for the great review and six stars.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Love and hugs...Portia
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You're so welcome! May you be wonderfully blessed this week, Portia!
