Football - A Novel
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Comment from Leann DS
Moving right along! :-) I just know these two are going to get into some kind of trouble with him helping her to coach the girls cross country team. Can't wait!
If I may, I noticed typos, as follows:
Before she came out, one of the other sectaries...
Should be secretaries
"Good Morning, Silver Cove Bears. This is Mrs. Riley. I'll be coaching girls' cross country. I know it's a late, but here's the ...
Remove the word "a"
That's all I noticed. I hope this is helpful. Well done. Hugs and blessings.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Moving right along! :-) I just know these two are going to get into some kind of trouble with him helping her to coach the girls cross country team. Can't wait!
If I may, I noticed typos, as follows:
Before she came out, one of the other sectaries...
Should be secretaries
"Good Morning, Silver Cove Bears. This is Mrs. Riley. I'll be coaching girls' cross country. I know it's a late, but here's the ...
Remove the word "a"
That's all I noticed. I hope this is helpful. Well done. Hugs and blessings.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the catches. It's always amazing that others don't catch them. I am so glad you did.
Comment from royowen
Katherine has accepted the coach's position concerning the girl's cross country team, and Gabriel is pleased with that. As the dogs are still growling at the intruder who is persistently stalking them, they decide to hold, there is a photo of the coach's car anyway. Well done Barbara. Blessings Roy
Typo : One of the other (secraties) called. secretaries? 2: I know it's late (decision) ?
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Katherine has accepted the coach's position concerning the girl's cross country team, and Gabriel is pleased with that. As the dogs are still growling at the intruder who is persistently stalking them, they decide to hold, there is a photo of the coach's car anyway. Well done Barbara. Blessings Roy
Typo : One of the other (secraties) called. secretaries? 2: I know it's late (decision) ?
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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I have made the corrections. Thank you. As always, I appreciate the help.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice to read about people that we would probably like in real life, which you always write about. And a few we would never like. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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It's always nice to read about people that we would probably like in real life, which you always write about. And a few we would never like. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
I like the way you are weaving this into a good clean romance I am sure to happen. Jock? I played sports in high school, football, and caught baseball, and had the girls. So I was a jock? LOL. Married a girl who would not give me time of day.
LOL.
I am enjoying this. Who is in the shadows? I suppose we will learn.
Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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I like the way you are weaving this into a good clean romance I am sure to happen. Jock? I played sports in high school, football, and caught baseball, and had the girls. So I was a jock? LOL. Married a girl who would not give me time of day.
LOL.
I am enjoying this. Who is in the shadows? I suppose we will learn.
Good one Barb.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Yes, you were a jock. All of my boys were jocks too. LOL I do understand the jock strud. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This another interesting chapter. It looks like she had finally started the school year and not we will see how many girls sign up for her to be their coach. There will be a lot more contact with Gabriel now. I look forward to the the next post.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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This another interesting chapter. It looks like she had finally started the school year and not we will see how many girls sign up for her to be their coach. There will be a lot more contact with Gabriel now. I look forward to the the next post.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Of course, she will have more contact with Gabriel. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
Another interesting chapter, Barbara, building on this relationship and still keeping us in suspense about the "watcher." It's nice that Katharine is becoming a little less self-conscious and is becoming more involved with school activities.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Another interesting chapter, Barbara, building on this relationship and still keeping us in suspense about the "watcher." It's nice that Katharine is becoming a little less self-conscious and is becoming more involved with school activities.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Goodness, I've just seen you are getting my last six! I'd better check where I left the others!!
I think everything is going to blow up soon, Katherine is doing so well at school, and at home, and making lots of friends, not only with Gabe. So, I'm sure there is a spy in the school who is keeping Mr Frost apprised of what's happening. Well done, Barbara, this is getting really exciting. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Goodness, I've just seen you are getting my last six! I'd better check where I left the others!!
I think everything is going to blow up soon, Katherine is doing so well at school, and at home, and making lots of friends, not only with Gabe. So, I'm sure there is a spy in the school who is keeping Mr Frost apprised of what's happening. Well done, Barbara, this is getting really exciting. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. That has happened to me before with the sixes. I must have accidentally given them out.
Comment from CA Keller
This is the first chapter I've read, but I'm captured now, I'll have to find the time to play catch-up and get the whole story to date. I have family in Texas, everything is big in Texas, right? I'm looking forward to reading from the beginning, keep it coming!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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This is the first chapter I've read, but I'm captured now, I'll have to find the time to play catch-up and get the whole story to date. I have family in Texas, everything is big in Texas, right? I'm looking forward to reading from the beginning, keep it coming!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Texas is like no other state. My husband was military and we lived all over. I grew up in the Midwest.
Comment from Begin Again
sectaries
I know it's a late,
Sounds like something is brewing, but I'm not sure just what it might be. Your work always flows so smoothly and it's easy to read. Great job! Smiles from me!
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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sectaries
I know it's a late,
Sounds like something is brewing, but I'm not sure just what it might be. Your work always flows so smoothly and it's easy to read. Great job! Smiles from me!
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
