Chair Side Romantic
This is my love story26 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Chair Side Romantic
Mary Vigasin your love story about Chair side Romantic.
when the leg of the chair broke, must of been a surprise and how embarrassing it was for your husband.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Chair Side Romantic
Mary Vigasin your love story about Chair side Romantic.
when the leg of the chair broke, must of been a surprise and how embarrassing it was for your husband.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the review.
It is appreciated. He was fine . I read him the story and he laughed.
Mary
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You are welcome Mary
Mary Vigasin
Gert
Comment from Judy Lawless
I love this, Mary! It sounded like you might get that public kiss after all, and then...The poor guy. Well written for flash. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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I love this, Mary! It sounded like you might get that public kiss after all, and then...The poor guy. Well written for flash. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind words it is appreciated. Your right poor guy I gave him a minor burn on the top of his head with hot cheese. We are a dangerous pair.
Mary
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Comment from Susan Newell
What a funny story. It's a good contest entry. I guess the broken chair spoiled the mood. I'm impressed that you were able to get within to seats of David McCullough!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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What a funny story. It's a good contest entry. I guess the broken chair spoiled the mood. I'm impressed that you were able to get within to seats of David McCullough!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Regards
Mary
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Mary:
It was really hard for me not to laugh out loud when you got to the proverbial "punch" line in your story. I trust your husband did not get hurt when his chair broke. Good that the night ended on a trip to the theater to see Ken Howard's one-man show. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Mary:
It was really hard for me not to laugh out loud when you got to the proverbial "punch" line in your story. I trust your husband did not get hurt when his chair broke. Good that the night ended on a trip to the theater to see Ken Howard's one-man show. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
He was fine.
Mary.
Comment from Melsky
I enjoyed the humorous twist at the end - but I felt it was too short of a story and it could've used more background leading up to the twist. I'd like to learn more about different ways the husband avoids PDA that would draw even more contrast with his behavior at the end. Keep at it!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed the humorous twist at the end - but I felt it was too short of a story and it could've used more background leading up to the twist. I'd like to learn more about different ways the husband avoids PDA that would draw even more contrast with his behavior at the end. Keep at it!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thanks the point was to write in 100 words
Comment from blondie560
Oh my gosh I chuckled out loud reading this. I was thinking he was leaning towards you to pick a piece of fuzz out of your hair or he dropped his napkin and was going to pick it up. I did not expect the broken leg!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Oh my gosh I chuckled out loud reading this. I was thinking he was leaning towards you to pick a piece of fuzz out of your hair or he dropped his napkin and was going to pick it up. I did not expect the broken leg!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Yep the leg of the chair have away most likely due to age. The chair not his.
Mary