Football - A Novel
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Comment from royowen
Of course the thought I had was that I wonder where Gabriel was, and why he was late? And why didn't he say anything, and now Katherine is concerned as his absence from school first thing. Have we got a romance going on here? Great episode, Reggie keeps growling. Great episode Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : Gabriel stared (in) that direction.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Of course the thought I had was that I wonder where Gabriel was, and why he was late? And why didn't he say anything, and now Katherine is concerned as his absence from school first thing. Have we got a romance going on here? Great episode, Reggie keeps growling. Great episode Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : Gabriel stared (in) that direction.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I have made the correction. Thank you for the catch.
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Most welcome Barbara,
Comment from lancellot
Another perfectly written chapter. Who is your editor? I am jealous. The only odd thing, and gets more and more odd as you show more about Gabriel's forward nature, his bravery, and butting in to help with our without permission. Him not investigating (being passive) when Reggie continually growls is out of character.
Just an observation.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Another perfectly written chapter. Who is your editor? I am jealous. The only odd thing, and gets more and more odd as you show more about Gabriel's forward nature, his bravery, and butting in to help with our without permission. Him not investigating (being passive) when Reggie continually growls is out of character.
Just an observation.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Gabriel is investigation now. We will see a hint of it in the next post.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, another great chapter that has a little bit of everything in it. I
love the story and Gabriel has become a great friend. I only found one thing:
Gabriel stared that direction. =Gabriel stared towards that direction.
Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Hi Barbara, another great chapter that has a little bit of everything in it. I
love the story and Gabriel has become a great friend. I only found one thing:
Gabriel stared that direction. =Gabriel stared towards that direction.
Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from Ben Colder
Oh no! Somebody is about to get a tong lashing. LOL.
Seems to be working toward a special time for someone.
An interest has developed.
Good twisting and turning this write.
Staying the course with you Barb.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Oh no! Somebody is about to get a tong lashing. LOL.
Seems to be working toward a special time for someone.
An interest has developed.
Good twisting and turning this write.
Staying the course with you Barb.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.