Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

Ah, the trials and tribulations of raising teenagers and young adults! I didn't have as many, but I can relate.

I found a few typos:

1. "the deadline for for filing our income tax was..." -remove one "for"

2. "and she thought she thought she would make better gradss thee.." - a few things here that I'm sure you'll see.



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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Thank you for the review and for catching those spags. Teenagers can give you so headaches. Thankfully, they usually grow up.
Beth

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Biographical Non-Fiction in continuation speaks about recalling memories of life with author's deceased husband put in an expressive stand of taletelling, structured detail with an organized description of life in summer and spring of 1988; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Thank you for the review and comments.
Beth