Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This combines the clever rhythm of a limerick with the spirit of Shel Silverstein. It is a delight to read and made me laugh several times over! Thank you for this gem.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thanks so very much......these are a little sloppy but fun for me.....I stare at it a while and just hit submit......Godspeed and Best Wishes

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A very cute poem for children. I have a question about the following verse:
"Soon she was rollin' and gigglin'
Goodbye Autumn Gold and Baby Boo
So happy soon she got to wigglin'
Free and fancy too"

Did the second and third lines get reversed? It messes up your rhyming. Also last very rhyming is different from rest. Just wondering.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thanks so very much.....you are right....this is a little untidy.....I think that you have helped me before with my sometime sloppiness and I am very grateful......Best to you and yours

reply by Anne Johnston on 15-Jan-2021

You are welcome. I have had lots of good hints here from others, so just want to do my part.

Comment from Nowae20

Excellent

Tales were told with not a lie
She became the po' folks pumpkin pie
Dang went the story that settled and set
That's the best dang pie we ever did 'et. I love your poem style

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thanks so very much......Best wishes to you going forward