Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Hugs and Kisses"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from lancellot
Very well made and also very sad. To have to struggle to find within ones own lifetime of memories some pure and gentle that happened between yourself and another person, without the stain of pain. I can't imagine that torture.
A very moving entry.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Very well made and also very sad. To have to struggle to find within ones own lifetime of memories some pure and gentle that happened between yourself and another person, without the stain of pain. I can't imagine that torture.
A very moving entry.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you Lance.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 4 line rhyming poem speaks unfortunately or truly human needs are missing in memories, in love or rebellion; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This 4 line rhyming poem speaks unfortunately or truly human needs are missing in memories, in love or rebellion; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well said. I am sure this is the feeling of all of us. How long since we have held a loved one in our arms and felt that life was good. We miss the human contact in this time of isolation.
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Very well said. I am sure this is the feeling of all of us. How long since we have held a loved one in our arms and felt that life was good. We miss the human contact in this time of isolation.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you Anne.
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You are welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork for your poem, Jim.
-A good topic with description and rhyme.
-I like how the poem is divided with
the wistfulness in the first half as
you remember the way things were.
-The second part shows your
frustration, using the lion's roar
as a good symbol of the feelings
building up inside.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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-Good artwork for your poem, Jim.
-A good topic with description and rhyme.
-I like how the poem is divided with
the wistfulness in the first half as
you remember the way things were.
-The second part shows your
frustration, using the lion's roar
as a good symbol of the feelings
building up inside.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you Pam, I appreciate your comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
The big vast world is still there, but unfortunately at this time, it's out of reach. Our hearts yearn for the human contact; that sharing that warms our soul. Loneliness turns to anger because we must stay inside instead. Well written and I enjoyed your thoughts. Smiles to you!
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The big vast world is still there, but unfortunately at this time, it's out of reach. Our hearts yearn for the human contact; that sharing that warms our soul. Loneliness turns to anger because we must stay inside instead. Well written and I enjoyed your thoughts. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much !
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a wonderful sentiment that we are all experiencing during this pandemic and you have succinctly mirrored it in this four-line Contest.
A very good entry. Good luck.
Ralf
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This is a wonderful sentiment that we are all experiencing during this pandemic and you have succinctly mirrored it in this four-line Contest.
A very good entry. Good luck.
Ralf
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks very much!
Comment from Cogitator
I had somewhat of an issue dealing with the context of "impelled." I am assuming that the lion is roaring its displeasure. If it means motivation to act, I guess you're seeking someone to hug...John
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I had somewhat of an issue dealing with the context of "impelled." I am assuming that the lion is roaring its displeasure. If it means motivation to act, I guess you're seeking someone to hug...John
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to this poem big time. I can only hug and kiss my husband and animals, I am use to hugging friends, patients and co- workers. Your words show a side to the pandemic that is hard. "Inside a lion roars" is a great line that shows feelings and emotions
Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I can relate to this poem big time. I can only hug and kiss my husband and animals, I am use to hugging friends, patients and co- workers. Your words show a side to the pandemic that is hard. "Inside a lion roars" is a great line that shows feelings and emotions
Excellent poetic form and use of words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you!