Night Moves
Sailing Along34 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Moonlit nights are indeed a pleasure to witness and you brought the scene to my eyes in this fine presentation, a great entry for the contest, good end rhymes too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Moonlit nights are indeed a pleasure to witness and you brought the scene to my eyes in this fine presentation, a great entry for the contest, good end rhymes too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Sometimes nature can take our breath away with its beauty and we get a glimpse of heaven, especially in such a situation/location as detailed in your lovely poem. The beauty of night can indeed move us, as in your poem's title.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Sometimes nature can take our breath away with its beauty and we get a glimpse of heaven, especially in such a situation/location as detailed in your lovely poem. The beauty of night can indeed move us, as in your poem's title.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading. I'm inspired by living next to Lake Superior, it's so beautiful. :)
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I live in a lovely location too, in southern New Zealand. Even if the world goes mad with political dramas, at least we can have a soothing landscape to look at.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Sharon. This is such a lovely poem that carries the reader away on night breezes to sail on bright moonbeams. So lovely... good luck!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hello Sharon. This is such a lovely poem that carries the reader away on night breezes to sail on bright moonbeams. So lovely... good luck!!
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much for this great review, I'm so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Beautiful poem with great detail to imagery. I love nothing more then to look up at the moon and stars just to realize how insignificant we really are. Excellent job and worthy of a six star rating!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Beautiful poem with great detail to imagery. I love nothing more then to look up at the moon and stars just to realize how insignificant we really are. Excellent job and worthy of a six star rating!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the 6 stars...it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is so very beautiful! Love the presentation and the rhyming. I just love the beautiful picture you have painted. Well done! And congratulations on your well deserved recognition as poet of the month!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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This is so very beautiful! Love the presentation and the rhyming. I just love the beautiful picture you have painted. Well done! And congratulations on your well deserved recognition as poet of the month!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem about the moonlit nights sailing on a boat underneath the stars shining bright in the Milky Way. It us a beautiful sight and experience to see.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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A very well-written four-line poem about the moonlit nights sailing on a boat underneath the stars shining bright in the Milky Way. It us a beautiful sight and experience to see.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I have spent many nights on Lake Meade looking to the heavens enjoying the stars. It is all the best on moonlit nights. Well done, Sharon. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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I have spent many nights on Lake Meade looking to the heavens enjoying the stars. It is all the best on moonlit nights. Well done, Sharon. Nancy:)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I live on the shores of Lake Superior and it's always an inspiration to me. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You wrote a very
good poem based on it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You set the scene and mood
very well in the first two lines.
-Then show the impact it had on you,
because words cannot describe it.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You wrote a very
good poem based on it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You set the scene and mood
very well in the first two lines.
-Then show the impact it had on you,
because words cannot describe it.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, I'm so glad to hear from you. I appreciate this nice review. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from mauial
Nicely penned. I love the imagary that your words painted. I like the feeling expressed at the awe of the stars with this:
I catch my breath, there are no words to say
about this show, that closes out my day.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Nicely penned. I love the imagary that your words painted. I like the feeling expressed at the awe of the stars with this:
I catch my breath, there are no words to say
about this show, that closes out my day.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and for this great review. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very relaxing poem, a fitting close to the day. Great rhyming. You have chosen a good picture to go along with it, and great colours to highlight it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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A very relaxing poem, a fitting close to the day. Great rhyming. You have chosen a good picture to go along with it, and great colours to highlight it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much sweet lady. I'm very happy to hear from you. :)
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You are welcome
