Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, this is a wonderful contribution to your Picture This club, even though it sad that the at the end, you had to remind us that this Christmas will be different no matter how many Christmas trees we decorate or stockings we hang by the fire.
You have chosen an excellent title for this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Dear JLR, this is a wonderful contribution to your Picture This club, even though it sad that the at the end, you had to remind us that this Christmas will be different no matter how many Christmas trees we decorate or stockings we hang by the fire.
You have chosen an excellent title for this poem.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Melissa, we shall all SING RESOUNDING SONGS of praise and joy next season~
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The following two sentences bring up my anguish feelings too.
These are: "Silent Night ready for all to share gifts made ready, bows and ribbons here and there" and "... we drop a tear, our grandchildren due to Covid can't come this year!"
Let's hope the vaccines will help kill the coronavirus and everything will be back to the old normal.
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The following two sentences bring up my anguish feelings too.
These are: "Silent Night ready for all to share gifts made ready, bows and ribbons here and there" and "... we drop a tear, our grandchildren due to Covid can't come this year!"
Let's hope the vaccines will help kill the coronavirus and everything will be back to the old normal.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Yes!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My house is decked in lights and trimmings but there will be no visitors this year, but I did it all to please myself as I love Christmas with all the trimmings. I felt the emotion in your words here and I am sorry your grandchildren can't visit you, a fine write for this club picture, love Dolly x
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My house is decked in lights and trimmings but there will be no visitors this year, but I did it all to please myself as I love Christmas with all the trimmings. I felt the emotion in your words here and I am sorry your grandchildren can't visit you, a fine write for this club picture, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks Dolly....we thank our Blessings for ZOOM (LOL)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your challenge poem. I enjoyed reading it although it is so poignant. I like the way the lines rhyme in order in each verse throughout your poem. You create a sense of longing for your family as they won't be able to gather. The picture is beautiful-I know it was part of the club challenge--but still it is beautiful. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a good job with your challenge poem. I enjoyed reading it although it is so poignant. I like the way the lines rhyme in order in each verse throughout your poem. You create a sense of longing for your family as they won't be able to gather. The picture is beautiful-I know it was part of the club challenge--but still it is beautiful. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you Jan.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the picure this challenge. It is sad that we cannot celebrate Christmas with our children and grandchildren this year.
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A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the picure this challenge. It is sad that we cannot celebrate Christmas with our children and grandchildren this year.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Sandra, however...with Gods allowance we will have next year!
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to your words. Most of my family will not be getting together for Christmas this year. Your poem reflects our current times and your poem has a feeling of sadness that all of us feel. Your words fit the picture perfectly.
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I can relate to your words. Most of my family will not be getting together for Christmas this year. Your poem reflects our current times and your poem has a feeling of sadness that all of us feel. Your words fit the picture perfectly.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Sending you a virtual hug! Know that this shall all be but memories we will be able, down the road, say, I remember when....
Comment from Polly Dolly
I enjoyed your rhyming scheme abba...acc. It's full of nostalgia and emotion. You paint a vivid picture with carefully chosen words. And there's a story arc within this poem too - from happy anticipation, to the sadness of family separated in these times. Very effective!
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I enjoyed your rhyming scheme abba...acc. It's full of nostalgia and emotion. You paint a vivid picture with carefully chosen words. And there's a story arc within this poem too - from happy anticipation, to the sadness of family separated in these times. Very effective!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Polly Dolly, heres smiling back at you with gladness!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Bedecked, But For Naught, presented in four tercets, finds this Christmas's typical scene of a holiday where we can't be together. Merry Christmas the best you can.
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This poem, Bedecked, But For Naught, presented in four tercets, finds this Christmas's typical scene of a holiday where we can't be together. Merry Christmas the best you can.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This shall pass and the Christmas will regain the joy and happiness as before:"We sit at the ready, the lists all rechecked
rocking together, we reminisce of memories that flare,
when into the warm hearth we both suddenly stare.
With the feeling of anguish, we both suspect
crashes in waves as we drop a tear,
our grandchildren due to Covid can't come this year!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. Merry Christmas my friend and a Happy New Year.
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This shall pass and the Christmas will regain the joy and happiness as before:"We sit at the ready, the lists all rechecked
rocking together, we reminisce of memories that flare,
when into the warm hearth we both suddenly stare.
With the feeling of anguish, we both suspect
crashes in waves as we drop a tear,
our grandchildren due to Covid can't come this year!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. Merry Christmas my friend and a Happy New Year.
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Iza, thanks!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I knew you would take this challenge and yes your sentiments are ringing loud and clear for all of us. All that beauty and so few to partake. The
strangeness of this year's celebration will soon be over.
So, let's have a Merry Christmas and hope for a Happy New Year!
Ralf
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I knew you would take this challenge and yes your sentiments are ringing loud and clear for all of us. All that beauty and so few to partake. The
strangeness of this year's celebration will soon be over.
So, let's have a Merry Christmas and hope for a Happy New Year!
Ralf
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
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Ralf, we must! We simply must move with the full confidence the Father. Mother, God is resoundingly within our souls and Peace is but a prayer away.
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So right!
