Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Football Chapter 6 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Here I am wondering if I missed was Mr Frost was approached by the police for slashing Katherine's four tires ?
Barb I find your that I like how your way of keeping my attention and yes, enjoying your story about Katerine being a widow with four boys..
Barb, with me longer being a member on Fanstory . Looks like I'm not able to give you a six rating.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Hello Barb
Here I am wondering if I missed was Mr Frost was approached by the police for slashing Katherine's four tires ?
Barb I find your that I like how your way of keeping my attention and yes, enjoying your story about Katerine being a widow with four boys..
Barb, with me longer being a member on Fanstory . Looks like I'm not able to give you a six rating.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Please don't worry about the six. You being on FS and reading my work is important to me. Thank you.
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Thank you Barb for you understanding why I cannot rate you with six stars.
Gert
Comment from Sankey
Another great chapter. Good storytelling as is your usual. I was a bit worried when I did not see you up first thins this morning, Monday, here. Frost definitely is off his rocker. No spags.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Another great chapter. Good storytelling as is your usual. I was a bit worried when I did not see you up first thins this morning, Monday, here. Frost definitely is off his rocker. No spags.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I was a little late in posting. I was getting Christmas packages ready to mail tomorrow.
Comment from BethShelby
I feel sorry for Frost's wife. She sounds like a decent lady with a husband that needs mental treatment. I would assume it must be him who slashed her tires. But if he isn't mentally disturbed, he would realize he would be the suspected. I look forward to your nest post
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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I feel sorry for Frost's wife. She sounds like a decent lady with a husband that needs mental treatment. I would assume it must be him who slashed her tires. But if he isn't mentally disturbed, he would realize he would be the suspected. I look forward to your nest post
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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I doubt he's concerned with repercussions only revenge. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so the plot is thickening. It's not very nice to have all tyres slashed by a vindictive person. I certainly hope she will be all right. I like the story. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Hi Barbara, so the plot is thickening. It's not very nice to have all tyres slashed by a vindictive person. I certainly hope she will be all right. I like the story. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter. Very realistic with camera's covering the parking lot. Most schools have them, based on what has been happening in the country. Also, good show of growth with Paul and Gabe.
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A well written chapter. Very realistic with camera's covering the parking lot. Most schools have them, based on what has been happening in the country. Also, good show of growth with Paul and Gabe.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Frost has surely gone too far now, that this act of revenge driven hatred is not only unreasonable, but an act of a man who's not himself, it's an act of sheer vandalism and so ugly it's not right. Well done, Barbara, this is a brilliant episode, blessings Roy
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Frost has surely gone too far now, that this act of revenge driven hatred is not only unreasonable, but an act of a man who's not himself, it's an act of sheer vandalism and so ugly it's not right. Well done, Barbara, this is a brilliant episode, blessings Roy
Typo : Pick up one of my son(')s
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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I have made the correction. Thank you for the catch.
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Well done,
