Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Football Chapter 5 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Daniel Massey
Gabriel blurted, "So she didn't threatened you or ask you to drop the charges?" (Threatened - take out the ed.)
Sometimes, when I'm reading other people's work, I notice mistakes that don't need changing. Maybe, you're the same? Maybe, I need to learn not everyone speaks the same. Great story. I hope there's going to be more.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Gabriel blurted, "So she didn't threatened you or ask you to drop the charges?" (Threatened - take out the ed.)
Sometimes, when I'm reading other people's work, I notice mistakes that don't need changing. Maybe, you're the same? Maybe, I need to learn not everyone speaks the same. Great story. I hope there's going to be more.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate it and have deleted that 'ed'.
Comment from Ben Colder
Yea, I thought this guy Frost was frosty in the brain. Maybe it is best and the court will get him some help. Sometimes stress can make a person act crazy. You got it going it seems.
Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Yea, I thought this guy Frost was frosty in the brain. Maybe it is best and the court will get him some help. Sometimes stress can make a person act crazy. You got it going it seems.
Good one Barb.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
