A grieving daughter
Grief and support28 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A grieving daughter", is an exceptionally well-written, and heart-wrenching piece. It was a privilege, to both read and review, this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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"A grieving daughter", is an exceptionally well-written, and heart-wrenching piece. It was a privilege, to both read and review, this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for you wonderful comments and review. It is appreciated
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a very personal write and I am sorry for your loss. When we lose someone close to us we are often in need of much support, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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This sounds like a very personal write and I am sorry for your loss. When we lose someone close to us we are often in need of much support, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you Dolly for your kind thoughts and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mother and daughter, relation with love and affection, empathy with grief is a common stand for keeping relation; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Mother and daughter, relation with love and affection, empathy with grief is a common stand for keeping relation; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Boogienights
This is very thoughtful and beautiful, with a true and heartfelt message. Some people grieve so much they can't get on with life.. I know, I've been there. This kind of empathy can help. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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This is very thoughtful and beautiful, with a true and heartfelt message. Some people grieve so much they can't get on with life.. I know, I've been there. This kind of empathy can help. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your kind comments and review
Comment from Wendy G
The sentiments are certainly filled with empathy, and comfort. I prefer a more regular style of poetry, but that is just me. I like the relationship between the person offering empathy and the grieving daughter, as she offers new thoughts for the daughter to draw comfort.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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The sentiments are certainly filled with empathy, and comfort. I prefer a more regular style of poetry, but that is just me. I like the relationship between the person offering empathy and the grieving daughter, as she offers new thoughts for the daughter to draw comfort.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Then why 3 stars. Because it is not in rhyme. Not all writers are able to wrote in rhyme but have a story to tell.
I am sorry that you could not look past this and look at the grief instead.
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Sorry, and yes, indeed you are right. It's just me.
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Funny when I don't like or don't iunderstand another's work I just skip over. But that is just me also. More consideration of the writers effort.
Comment from J. Raphael
This was a tear jerker. A tribute to mom to a friend/brother/sister was very well written. You have a very good grasp on how to express yourself in your poetry-and Well done!
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This was a tear jerker. A tribute to mom to a friend/brother/sister was very well written. You have a very good grasp on how to express yourself in your poetry-and Well done!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you I appreciate your review and kind comments.
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It was a heartfelt tribute poem to read-R
Comment from Rosemary wanjiru
Touching and heartwarming.comforting words, they bring tears to my eyes. Well written and beautiful.nice photo, it's serene. it's really hard to find the right words to comfort a grieving person.nice work
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Touching and heartwarming.comforting words, they bring tears to my eyes. Well written and beautiful.nice photo, it's serene. it's really hard to find the right words to comfort a grieving person.nice work
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you I appreciate your review and kind comments.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a lovely and very supportive and comforting poem. I don't know if it is fiction or non-fiction but it would certainly be a lovely letter to give a grieving daughter.
I particularely liked the lines:
"But remember, your mom built a strong foundation for you with her sacrifices and love.
She built this foundation for you to stand and grow on."
This is a nice metaphor: a foundation for you to stand on.
Nice work. Blessings to you and yours.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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This is a lovely and very supportive and comforting poem. I don't know if it is fiction or non-fiction but it would certainly be a lovely letter to give a grieving daughter.
I particularely liked the lines:
"But remember, your mom built a strong foundation for you with her sacrifices and love.
She built this foundation for you to stand and grow on."
This is a nice metaphor: a foundation for you to stand on.
Nice work. Blessings to you and yours.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments. Part of it was written to an acquaintance who lost her mother.