Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from John Carey
Spot on, and the text flows... does not feel forced to meet the poem rules. So hard to do well, and you have! The poem itself is very descrptive, maintaining a formal, old world style that works for the topic. The artwork fits as well, if a bit abstract. I could really feel your poem. Thank you for this exceptional poetic effort
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Spot on, and the text flows... does not feel forced to meet the poem rules. So hard to do well, and you have! The poem itself is very descrptive, maintaining a formal, old world style that works for the topic. The artwork fits as well, if a bit abstract. I could really feel your poem. Thank you for this exceptional poetic effort
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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John, my, I am so very humbled by your depth of commentary. This six-star rating is a wonderful validation for me on this, my first ,attempt at a minute poem. My preferred style is free verse.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I truly love minute poems, you can do so much in such a short piece and make it dramatic. You have done just that in the repeating 8444 and very well rhymed
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I truly love minute poems, you can do so much in such a short piece and make it dramatic. You have done just that in the repeating 8444 and very well rhymed
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Barb, thank you! I must say this, being my first go at the minute poem format, I found it a fun task to create. I so value your time taken to read and comment always.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Jim.
-You have written a
good minute poem
that meets all of the
requirements.
-A good topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-A good progression showing
the difficulties in this relationship.
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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-Good artwork, Jim.
-You have written a
good minute poem
that meets all of the
requirements.
-A good topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-A good progression showing
the difficulties in this relationship.
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank for the good wishes, have a wonderful weekend.
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You are very welcome, and you do the same. We are getting a lot of rain, but luckily it is a mild one.
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Lover's Quarrel, has the proper formatting and notes that when lovers think something is amiss, they need to discuss calmly. Arguing never improves a relationship.
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This minute poem, Lover's Quarrel, has the proper formatting and notes that when lovers think something is amiss, they need to discuss calmly. Arguing never improves a relationship.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Bill, thanks
Comment from patcelaw
For any relationship to survive in this world it always takes effort on the part of both. None of is always right, nor are we always wrong.
Patricia
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For any relationship to survive in this world it always takes effort on the part of both. None of is always right, nor are we always wrong.
Patricia
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Patricia, thank you!
