Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Janet Foor
"The Master's Messenger" is a beautiful message of your faith. Lovely imagery of a dove sharing God's impact on your life.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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"The Master's Messenger" is a beautiful message of your faith. Lovely imagery of a dove sharing God's impact on your life.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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JAnet, I smile back in great gratitude from your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about having faith in God often surprises even the strongest believer when He does something that seems too impossible to do.
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A very well-written poem about having faith in God often surprises even the strongest believer when He does something that seems too impossible to do.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Sandra, yes always in amazement of His messengers in so many aspects of a day's journey.
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I don't know if I need to enter this contest or not. What a wonderfully written poem about the Holy Spirit coming into your life. I wish I had six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Well, I don't know if I need to enter this contest or not. What a wonderfully written poem about the Holy Spirit coming into your life. I wish I had six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Mike, of course you should enter...you always provide such deep and richly worded perspectives on Faith. I welcome. the virtual six form you!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
Nice piece of poetry having smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the poem.
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR,
Nice piece of poetry having smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the poem.
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you kind sir!
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from jake cosmos aller
don't usually like religious poetry as I am not a believer, kind of a Buddhist atheist but this poem was well done from a technical point of view like the traditional use of rhyme and rhythm well done
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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don't usually like religious poetry as I am not a believer, kind of a Buddhist atheist but this poem was well done from a technical point of view like the traditional use of rhyme and rhythm well done
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Jake, thank you, I appreciate the time you took to read and to comment, I have danced around many theologies and I am still a seeker of Truth.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
i found this to be an interesting piece to read. This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
i found this to be an interesting piece to read. This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Cookie, I welcome your review and comments.
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is truly beautiful and a very fitting entry for the contest. It touches my own heart to read of Angels surrounding your fine self, and to also know that when it is needed, Angels will surround me or anyone else. It's a pity that not all of us will realise we have Angels around us when we need them. Thank you for sharing this my friend and best of luck to you xoxoxoxoxoxo
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This is truly beautiful and a very fitting entry for the contest. It touches my own heart to read of Angels surrounding your fine self, and to also know that when it is needed, Angels will surround me or anyone else. It's a pity that not all of us will realise we have Angels around us when we need them. Thank you for sharing this my friend and best of luck to you xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Gypsymooncat, I smile back in appreciation for your time spent reading and commenting on my Faith poem.
Comment from MissMerri
This is so beautiful and so inspiring. I loved every word and enjoyed reading it more than once. It seems God does, in many cases, send a bird to signal a special message of His caring. (Izzy's Story is an example) I thought your internal rhyme and free-flowing lines were so pleasant to the ear. I only have one suggestion... "My heart's desire is to shut out..." I would make 'shutout' two words rather than one. This was such a pleasure to read. Best wishes in the contest. MM
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This is so beautiful and so inspiring. I loved every word and enjoyed reading it more than once. It seems God does, in many cases, send a bird to signal a special message of His caring. (Izzy's Story is an example) I thought your internal rhyme and free-flowing lines were so pleasant to the ear. I only have one suggestion... "My heart's desire is to shut out..." I would make 'shutout' two words rather than one. This was such a pleasure to read. Best wishes in the contest. MM
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Miss Meri, thank you for the suggestion and the good wishes.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, this poem is a great testimony of your faith and beautifully expressed; but I have one question. Why have you added that short repetition on the end ?
Please write me back, if you would be so kind, so that I may understand your purpose.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Dear JLR, this poem is a great testimony of your faith and beautifully expressed; but I have one question. Why have you added that short repetition on the end ?
Please write me back, if you would be so kind, so that I may understand your purpose.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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My intention was to pull the essence of each stanza into a stand alone summation of the poet as I a prayer.
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when you say ? As I a prayer? do you mean as a person who prays?
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Yes, sorry for my lack of clarity
Comment from lyenochka
This is a very good message of faith. You start with the question of suffering and then you give us the answer from God that He really is present and our future is secure. Best wishes in the contest!
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This is a very good message of faith. You start with the question of suffering and then you give us the answer from God that He really is present and our future is secure. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes
