Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Tfawcus,
All aboard the double decker in England. What a wonderful ride I had when up top viewing London in the 70's.
Still recall the excitement of climbing to the top and swinging my hat in the air as people passed by. Crazy American they shouted..but they waved back.
Good job with this.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Sammielwf. Good of you to drop by. Glad it brought back some happy memories for you. All the best, Tony

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Tony, what an imaginative idea this is, to see us folks on this planet, as the people on a double decker bus. Thank you for the invitation to come aboard.
I would definitely like a seat next to you, if only for an hour or two, Just to hear your opinion on the things we see as we pass by.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Suzanna. Good of you to drop by. My memories of London are getting a bit hazy now. It's been more than fifty years since I lived there. All the best, Tony

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Now wouldn't it be nice if we all got on the bus and learned to get along? I like this 20 word poem, Tony. It has a charm about it that I cannot explain. Blessings and thanks for sharing. Bob

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Bob. Good of you to drop by. I hope you're travelling well. All the best, Tony

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Yes, a good 20 syllable piem Tony, its when the bus breaks down, then we are in trouble lol I love the photo of the double decker, I'm old enough to remember the ones that used to go up Port Road. Good to read you again, cheers Valda

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Valda. Good of you to drop by. I didn't realise double-deckers had been imported here for a while. All the best, Tony

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Tony,
I love these tour busses. They are a good metaphor of how we should be accepting of all peopld. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Joan. Good of you to drop by. All the best, Tony

reply by dragonpoet on 21-Oct-2020

No problem, Tony.
Joan

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I like your poem as well as the presentation. Your syllable count is correct. I saw no errors. You did a great job. Do you have double-decker buses in Australia? We don't have any here in the states that I've seen. You did a great job. Shirley

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Shirley. Good of you to drop by. No double-deckers here either, though I'm told that there used to be a few in Adelaide years ago, imported as a curiosity. All the best, Tony

Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

What an upbeat little poem, nice simile. It's the kind of thing we all need right now. Best of luck in the 20 syllable contest and congratulations on being recognized.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, L. Kalere. Good of you to drop by. I appreciate your good luck wishes. All the best, Tony

Comment from Eternal Muse

Exceptional

Tony, I loved it!

You packed volumes in these three lines. Comparing life's journey to an omnibus was clever. It looks like this photo was taken in London, if I am not mistaken.

Excellent write. It should do very well in the contest, good luck in the books.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Yelena. Good of you to drop by. Yes, an iconic and ubiquitous form of transport in London still. It's a while since I've seen one. All the best, Tony

reply by Eternal Muse on 21-Oct-2020

I knew it was London.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Tony, this is a clever twenty words' poem. It had me smile, actually. Yes, you could certainly say that life is like a trip on an omnibus which is made for our use. Good one. I liked it. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Ulla. Good of you to drop by. Glad you enjoyed it. All the best, Tony

Comment from Anne-Marie brison

Excellent

Dear author,


Great job!!! Best of luck with the contest and your writing!!!! God bless you and your family!!!!! Life is definitely a crazy ride!!!!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Anne-Marie. Good of you to drop by. A crazy ride indeed! All good wishes to you and your family, too.