The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Winter's Cold Bite"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is wonderful. I really like how you setup us up for a wonderful romantic perfect moment and it shifts with the door flying open. Very nicely done. You do a wonderful job of setting up a moment. I loved it.
Small typo: "Keep me warm," I ->S<-aid, as we spooned under the covers
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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This is wonderful. I really like how you setup us up for a wonderful romantic perfect moment and it shifts with the door flying open. Very nicely done. You do a wonderful job of setting up a moment. I loved it.
Small typo: "Keep me warm," I ->S<-aid, as we spooned under the covers
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your encouraging words.
Comment from royowen
Poor Jake, my brother has seizures, but there's nothing in my family that suggests any of us can have it, but a head wound will do it. There's nothing better than being a parent, except maybe being a grandparent. Well done my friend, this is is an amazing episode, and you've left it in the right place for the next episode, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Poor Jake, my brother has seizures, but there's nothing in my family that suggests any of us can have it, but a head wound will do it. There's nothing better than being a parent, except maybe being a grandparent. Well done my friend, this is is an amazing episode, and you've left it in the right place for the next episode, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Roy. I really appreciate it.
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Welcome