Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "As Our World Turned"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from equestrik
These are interesting and well told memories of your life. It is a bit difficult for me to follow when you switch the way you tell them but I figured it out. This is a sweet thing to do for your children.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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These are interesting and well told memories of your life. It is a bit difficult for me to follow when you switch the way you tell them but I figured it out. This is a sweet thing to do for your children.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments, It is always just an assortment of different memories I have of things that happened within a certain time period. and It not like a novel where the storyline is more continuous.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sorry not to have a six. A good one Beth as always. I was thinking how the mother's tuition kicked in when finding your daughter. Seems the Lord is always there if one would only listen and you heard His voice.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Sorry not to have a six. A good one Beth as always. I was thinking how the mother's tuition kicked in when finding your daughter. Seems the Lord is always there if one would only listen and you heard His voice.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thanks Chuck, I appreciate the reviews and your comments.
Beth
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Once again, a delightful chapter in your book. The things children get up to and into.
Noticed a typo:
I was using my time to vacuum the new gold shag carpet whish (which) we'd had installed..
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Once again, a delightful chapter in your book. The things children get up to and into.
Noticed a typo:
I was using my time to vacuum the new gold shag carpet whish (which) we'd had installed..
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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I'm glad you liked it Rebecca, I always enjoy your reviews. Thank for pointing out the typo. I fixed it.
Beth
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a pretty neat chapter. Funny how your daughter hid in the trunk and your spidey senses tingled until you found her. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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This was a pretty neat chapter. Funny how your daughter hid in the trunk and your spidey senses tingled until you found her. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. I'm glad your desided to stop by and read another of my chapters.
Beth
