Corn Moon
12 seasons haiku suite18 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This was a beautiful suite of haiku that highlighted the wonder of the moon and its different phases throughout the year. The artwork is lovely as well. I enjoyed this informative piece. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This was a beautiful suite of haiku that highlighted the wonder of the moon and its different phases throughout the year. The artwork is lovely as well. I enjoyed this informative piece. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, June.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--I wasn't aware the months had their own descriptive names. I've got my own rated R names for them, but this is a family writing site!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--I wasn't aware the months had their own descriptive names. I've got my own rated R names for them, but this is a family writing site!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a stunning Haiku suite. Breathtaking! I didn't realize there are so many different moons, for all months of the year. I was born in October, so that is Hunter's moon or moon of the falling leaves. You did an incredible job on the presentation, my dear; I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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What a stunning Haiku suite. Breathtaking! I didn't realize there are so many different moons, for all months of the year. I was born in October, so that is Hunter's moon or moon of the falling leaves. You did an incredible job on the presentation, my dear; I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for the six stars! Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So many colourful moons here and if the moon could speak it would be grateful for such an in-depth consideration of its seasonal show of colour, much enjoyed, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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So many colourful moons here and if the moon could speak it would be grateful for such an in-depth consideration of its seasonal show of colour, much enjoyed, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Striking suite--vivid imagery--in your face vs obscure metaphor (not my strong suit). The footnote merits a post in itself. I crave the strawberry moon! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Striking suite--vivid imagery--in your face vs obscure metaphor (not my strong suit). The footnote merits a post in itself. I crave the strawberry moon! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! You covered the whole year of full moons in suite of twelve haiku! Great job with this! I especially like how each moon makes us aware of some aspect of nature, showing us a time when mankind was much more tied to natural events.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Wow! You covered the whole year of full moons in suite of twelve haiku! Great job with this! I especially like how each moon makes us aware of some aspect of nature, showing us a time when mankind was much more tied to natural events.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this tour de force. I had not heard of most of these names, including the "Corn Moon" and appreciated learning their Native American origins. The artwork you selected is very appealing along with the examples at the end. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you for sharing this tour de force. I had not heard of most of these names, including the "Corn Moon" and appreciated learning their Native American origins. The artwork you selected is very appealing along with the examples at the end. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and six stars. I really appreciate it.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Tina Crute
I think you have outdone yourself with this one. This would make a beautiful children's book! I can see the beautiful images now, as the kids are doing a lesson on Native Americans making a to-do list of sorts for the year. Great writing. Nicely put together!
Tina
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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I think you have outdone yourself with this one. This would make a beautiful children's book! I can see the beautiful images now, as the kids are doing a lesson on Native Americans making a to-do list of sorts for the year. Great writing. Nicely put together!
Tina
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you Tina :)
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You're welcome. That poem really impressed me:)
