Smokey
Smokey's red bandanna.31 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Willie,
Great job on this poem and story about the death of the Rodeo clown, Smokey Brown and the red bandanna. Smokey was a brave cowboy. I love your rhyming of your end word. This is such a lovely story. I enjoyed reading from beginning to the end. Well done. Happy future writing:-)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Hello Willie,
Great job on this poem and story about the death of the Rodeo clown, Smokey Brown and the red bandanna. Smokey was a brave cowboy. I love your rhyming of your end word. This is such a lovely story. I enjoyed reading from beginning to the end. Well done. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Joyce, I very much appreciate the six star review and comments.
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You are welcome, Willie.
Comment from Colin John
Hi Willie, this is fine poem deserves more than a 5 just for effort, I have none left I am afraid,a great Cowboy post and thank you for sharing. Kind regards Colin
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Hi Willie, this is fine poem deserves more than a 5 just for effort, I have none left I am afraid,a great Cowboy post and thank you for sharing. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story/poem about Smokey the rodeo clown who died a hero when he saved another's life as he put his own life on the line and only leave his red bandanna as souvenir.
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A very well-written story/poem about Smokey the rodeo clown who died a hero when he saved another's life as he put his own life on the line and only leave his red bandanna as souvenir.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Jacob David Collins
It was sad to hear that he had been killed by the bull, but you can see how the story has become almost a local legend. I enjoyed reading this piece and I liked the rhyme and I thought the writing was well written. I enjoyed reading it!
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It was sad to hear that he had been killed by the bull, but you can see how the story has become almost a local legend. I enjoyed reading this piece and I liked the rhyme and I thought the writing was well written. I enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from royowen
You're very good at these Willie, poor old Smokey. Who did his best, and he was decidedly a hero. Beautifully written Willie, with a tremendous sense tale telling and A very articulate narrative, with a smooth, Abab rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
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You're very good at these Willie, poor old Smokey. Who did his best, and he was decidedly a hero. Beautifully written Willie, with a tremendous sense tale telling and A very articulate narrative, with a smooth, Abab rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile Willie as you told this story of a rodeo clown. I have never been to a rodeo and they sound like a lot of fun, but dangerous! He he he, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This made me smile Willie as you told this story of a rodeo clown. I have never been to a rodeo and they sound like a lot of fun, but dangerous! He he he, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a great story about a brave cowboy Smokey. Great descriptive imagery and visuals. It was very tragic to read about how he died. He became a hero and legend. I liked your artistic presentation and artwork. Very well written and thank you for sharing.
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This was a great story about a brave cowboy Smokey. Great descriptive imagery and visuals. It was very tragic to read about how he died. He became a hero and legend. I liked your artistic presentation and artwork. Very well written and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Smokey
by Willie P. Smith
Hello, Willie,
I really like your poem. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme. Great imagery. In Spain we have bullfights and matadores, bullfighters. Many have died the same way Smokey did. Well done.
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Smokey
by Willie P. Smith
Hello, Willie,
I really like your poem. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme. Great imagery. In Spain we have bullfights and matadores, bullfighters. Many have died the same way Smokey did. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
Willie, I swear we are watching you become better and better with every poem you write. This is an exceptionally good poem! It's not only a poem, but you told an entire story throughout! Great job!
Your friend,
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Willie, I swear we are watching you become better and better with every poem you write. This is an exceptionally good poem! It's not only a poem, but you told an entire story throughout! Great job!
Your friend,
Patty
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Your very inspirational comments and six star review are very much appreciated. Thank you very much, Patty.
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You're very welcome, Willie!
God bless!
Patty
Comment from RShipp
What a great story of a town's hero you have placed in rhyme. Wonderfully done!
There are so many dangerous jobs out there in the world... But this one has to rank near the top!
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What a great story of a town's hero you have placed in rhyme. Wonderfully done!
There are so many dangerous jobs out there in the world... But this one has to rank near the top!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020