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Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Ben Colder
On reservations they still sing the song. It is so true. He is our friend. You bring the reader to an understanding of how it was. Many good high places especially the thought of taking the dead child from the mother. Easier said then done.
Good one Bro. Sorry about the rating.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
Know this, that you have my respect from the first to the last word of review, no matter how many stars. I love the mention of this song on the reservation. I think to of how Apostle Paul spoke of the gospel from general revelation to special revelation through Jesus, and how it impacted Indian life, despite the fact that those who moved west did not always have good intentions and pure motives. For all have sinned...I'm blessed to know you.
Comment from
royowen
That is one of simple hymns that carries an amazing truth with, how we should love God with all our hearts for His goodness, and never lean to our own reasoning, no wonder He looks at our hearts and not our deeds. Beautifully and sensitively and beautifully written my friend, excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
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