The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Thunder on the Range"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from Alaskastory
"Thunder on the Range" is a chapter with exciting adventure. As the hunt began, I had a little trouble knowing who all was there. I assumed Jake was not, but, of course spotted him there in the end. I look forward to reading how this hunt comes out.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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"Thunder on the Range" is a chapter with exciting adventure. As the hunt began, I had a little trouble knowing who all was there. I assumed Jake was not, but, of course spotted him there in the end. I look forward to reading how this hunt comes out.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Marie. I'm striving to have some wide-open scenes with the idea to follow your lead and then re-write as a screenplay. You have been a teacher/inspiration for me and didn't know it! Surprise.
