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Comment from Sankey
What an emotional and stirring chapter. Glad she has met Tray and knows he is good for her security. I am ignoring all the left out joining words that are in dialogue, hehe.
"Simon, Jose, and I have this. I understand a comma is not permitted with "and" following.
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What an emotional and stirring chapter. Glad she has met Tray and knows he is good for her security. I am ignoring all the left out joining words that are in dialogue, hehe.
"Simon, Jose, and I have this. I understand a comma is not permitted with "and" following.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I have been taught to use the comma. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another brilliant chapter, Barbara, I hope things go alright at the funeral and no one is waiting who shouldn't be. I'm glad Mac is coming around a bit now, but I don't know what the alcohol poisoning will have done to her. We are in a tense situation, whichever way we look at it. I'm glad Mac has all those people their guarding her. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra x
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Another brilliant chapter, Barbara, I hope things go alright at the funeral and no one is waiting who shouldn't be. I'm glad Mac is coming around a bit now, but I don't know what the alcohol poisoning will have done to her. We are in a tense situation, whichever way we look at it. I'm glad Mac has all those people their guarding her. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I never do well in the contests.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great story and you told it well. The characters are so real and the conversations are natural. I can hardly wait until your next posting. Well done!
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This is a great story and you told it well. The characters are so real and the conversations are natural. I can hardly wait until your next posting. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouratement.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A convincing, well-written chapter to an interesting novel. I could feel Logan's concern for McKenzie's well being when he decides to go to the ceremony of the cremation. He left four trusted people to look after her, but will it be enough?
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A convincing, well-written chapter to an interesting novel. I could feel Logan's concern for McKenzie's well being when he decides to go to the ceremony of the cremation. He left four trusted people to look after her, but will it be enough?
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome!
Comment from BethShelby
This is good chapter. It should like Logan left McKinsey i good hands. I hope nothing else goes wrong while he is away. I'm enjoyed this and always look forward to the nest chapter.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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This is good chapter. It should like Logan left McKinsey i good hands. I hope nothing else goes wrong while he is away. I'm enjoyed this and always look forward to the nest chapter.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Barbara, this is a lovely chapter and they all stand by Mackenzie. It was a heck of an ordeal she went through. I don't know what it is. Everything seems so cozy. There's danger lurking around the corner. II feel uneasy.
She reached up with her free hand and touched her lips. = She reached ..... and touched his lips.
All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Awe, Barbara, this is a lovely chapter and they all stand by Mackenzie. It was a heck of an ordeal she went through. I don't know what it is. Everything seems so cozy. There's danger lurking around the corner. II feel uneasy.
She reached up with her free hand and touched her lips. = She reached ..... and touched his lips.
All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I was wondering about that area. I'll fix it.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I love the storyline and the characters blend together perfectly;-) Well written and very creative all the way through!
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
May God bless you and your family;-)
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I love the storyline and the characters blend together perfectly;-) Well written and very creative all the way through!
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
May God bless you and your family;-)
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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