The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Home on the Range"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a wonderful, well told story!
"Well, now here (hear) me out. I don't know of a hog raisin' book or homesteading book, neither.
But if you stay her (here) awhile and expect to eat, I could use a man's help for a spell."
As we leaned on the railing, Sky (Skye) smiled, as if her bad days were gone with the wind.
I heaved inside with,(?) but then as I sought for Jake's soul through his eyes, my insides tightened.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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This is a wonderful, well told story!
"Well, now here (hear) me out. I don't know of a hog raisin' book or homesteading book, neither.
But if you stay her (here) awhile and expect to eat, I could use a man's help for a spell."
As we leaned on the railing, Sky (Skye) smiled, as if her bad days were gone with the wind.
I heaved inside with,(?) but then as I sought for Jake's soul through his eyes, my insides tightened.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Rebecca. I treasure your commitment and always look forward to hearing from you good, bad, or ugly. But I'm glad you like it enough to stay with it! Blessings around the bend!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
This is an EXCELLENT story! I was captivated the entire time I was reading;-) Creative and interesting storyline, as well as being as warm and inviting as a sweet old quilt or a bear rug;-)
Thanxxx for sharing;-) Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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This is an EXCELLENT story! I was captivated the entire time I was reading;-) Creative and interesting storyline, as well as being as warm and inviting as a sweet old quilt or a bear rug;-)
Thanxxx for sharing;-) Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your descriptions of old quilt or bear rug. That made my day. I could not have wished for a more wonderful comparison. Blessings around the bend!
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;-)
