Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my word, this is just brilliant, J. Without a doubt you write free verse to the supreme. You instantly and adeptly brought me into the turmoil and struggles with emotion and an ever shifting ground.
Your strength found in faith is strong. This has superior pacing, vivid imagery and is a top notch free verse.
Very good and what a lovely tribute to all your classmates. I don't remember having read one before so this is something very special.
Many thanks for sharing today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Oh my word, this is just brilliant, J. Without a doubt you write free verse to the supreme. You instantly and adeptly brought me into the turmoil and struggles with emotion and an ever shifting ground.
Your strength found in faith is strong. This has superior pacing, vivid imagery and is a top notch free verse.
Very good and what a lovely tribute to all your classmates. I don't remember having read one before so this is something very special.
Many thanks for sharing today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Gloria, I am very humbled by your kind review and reflection, thank you so much!
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This was really well written and I thought your words had a nice flow which made your poem very easy to read and to sink into. The last few stanzas create a very powerful image and it made me think of this person getting stronger as they found their faith. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This was really well written and I thought your words had a nice flow which made your poem very easy to read and to sink into. The last few stanzas create a very powerful image and it made me think of this person getting stronger as they found their faith. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Jacob, thank you for reviewing and commenting on this free verse offering.
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse use line breaks, consonance and internal rhyme to show how much strength frinends gave you. It shows you remembering by looking to the sky and seeing their lights.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This free verse use line breaks, consonance and internal rhyme to show how much strength frinends gave you. It shows you remembering by looking to the sky and seeing their lights.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Joan, thank you very much for seeing the subtle use of poetic devices used within this free verse poem.
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No problem, JLR.
Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Whisper of Words
by JLR
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse entry for your class project. You did well. I'm sure your classmates and teacher appreciate it.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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The Whisper of Words
by JLR
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse entry for your class project. You did well. I'm sure your classmates and teacher appreciate it.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Gypsy, thank you very much for your constant review's and supportive comments.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Excellent free verse. Not my favorite type of poetry but I thoroughly enjoyed this work. Great Christian message of the benefit of faith in our chaotic world.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Excellent free verse. Not my favorite type of poetry but I thoroughly enjoyed this work. Great Christian message of the benefit of faith in our chaotic world.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Lance, thank you 🙏
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful story of being redeemed by the light of God. We have all felt down and desperate at one time or another in our lives. Seeing something like that would surely be a comfort. You have described this so vividly, I could almost feel it.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is a beautiful story of being redeemed by the light of God. We have all felt down and desperate at one time or another in our lives. Seeing something like that would surely be a comfort. You have described this so vividly, I could almost feel it.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Boogie nights, thank you very much!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was very well written. I have enjoyed reading it. I think you got a very good flow to the words, and that's not always easy with a free verse, so nice job with that.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This was very well written. I have enjoyed reading it. I think you got a very good flow to the words, and that's not always easy with a free verse, so nice job with that.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Amada, thank you. I apprecaite your shared comments,
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so glad you are enjoying your class. I am trying to keep my faith and sanity through everything pressing me at the moment and write. Writing is a wonderful outlet for me. I see it is for you as well. Yes, keep believing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I'm so glad you are enjoying your class. I am trying to keep my faith and sanity through everything pressing me at the moment and write. Writing is a wonderful outlet for me. I see it is for you as well. Yes, keep believing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Sally, hugs back to you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are comforting, descriptive and creative.
I love the last stanza as it takes us to a place where we are free.
I pondered on the words of this poem and it brought me back
to letting go. Great poem! Have a great day!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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The author's words are comforting, descriptive and creative.
I love the last stanza as it takes us to a place where we are free.
I pondered on the words of this poem and it brought me back
to letting go. Great poem! Have a great day!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Harmony, I do thank you very much
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You are highly creative and it makes the message special especially through your presentation. The message is so uplifting. Believing is power. Well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You are highly creative and it makes the message special especially through your presentation. The message is so uplifting. Believing is power. Well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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heavenempress, thank you!
