The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Homeless Heart on the Range"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from royowen
Although as a believer who's experienced the best and worst of life, eventually if adopts a good attitude and can believe when God says, all things work together for good, I remember a gift one is born with, as long as it's selflessly given, it works out well, beautifully written. And you've done a good job of placing yourself in the opposite gender, and have done well in the process, excellent work my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Although as a believer who's experienced the best and worst of life, eventually if adopts a good attitude and can believe when God says, all things work together for good, I remember a gift one is born with, as long as it's selflessly given, it works out well, beautifully written. And you've done a good job of placing yourself in the opposite gender, and have done well in the process, excellent work my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks so much. I'm eager to get to the place where she goes into town and while in church sees who poorly outcast Indians are treated. So she will start a mission to help fill the void she's felt.
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Yes indeed, God loves all...equally.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good story. I'd almost forgotten about it. Jane is angry that her husband took the bullet for another man and she doesn't want his pity or anything to do with him. The life on the Western frontier was hard with the Indians and outlaws. You deal well with this lady's emotional outburst.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is a good story. I'd almost forgotten about it. Jane is angry that her husband took the bullet for another man and she doesn't want his pity or anything to do with him. The life on the Western frontier was hard with the Indians and outlaws. You deal well with this lady's emotional outburst.
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Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks so much, Beth. I know I'm working on two westerns at the same time. It's hard for me to keep track.
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I don't know how you do it. I would be getting them mixed up. They are both very interesting.
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I don't know how you do it. I would be getting them mixed up. They are both very interesting.
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I've fallen in love with each character and the plot going forward. And congrats to you for getting the recognition you deserve for you true story.