Treasure Hunters
A Trinet entry15 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A very good title for this poem - this Trinet ( not familiar with the format )reminding us of the many and varied treasures that the sea may have in her hold - lovely pic
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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A very good title for this poem - this Trinet ( not familiar with the format )reminding us of the many and varied treasures that the sea may have in her hold - lovely pic
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a really nice composition in the Trinet form. Wording is well done and descriptive. I particularly like the first stanza which is so appropriate. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This is a really nice composition in the Trinet form. Wording is well done and descriptive. I particularly like the first stanza which is so appropriate. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you! The New England coast has so many stories and legends of sailors, shipwrecks and treasure. I felt like focusing on that today. Thanks for dropping by to read and review!
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Yes, I'm from Massachusetts. Certainly a lot of folklore and sea tales. :)
Comment from Puzzle
This is a great trinet about the sea. I like how you speak of Neptune and his kingdom I'm under the water. I don't know much about that story but I know enough to understand this piece. Great job!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This is a great trinet about the sea. I like how you speak of Neptune and his kingdom I'm under the water. I don't know much about that story but I know enough to understand this piece. Great job!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights! Glad you liked it.
Comment from skyer111
I enjoyed your poem and loved the way you brought memories into the poem through the broken glass and how it got there moving with the water and how people loose their lives and the ocean rages well done
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your poem and loved the way you brought memories into the poem through the broken glass and how it got there moving with the water and how people loose their lives and the ocean rages well done
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
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So glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a well penned poem. I enjoyed the Neptune references and the way you depicted the ocean. It was as if I could taste the sea. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. With respect. -January L.
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This is a well penned poem. I enjoyed the Neptune references and the way you depicted the ocean. It was as if I could taste the sea. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. With respect. -January L.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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So glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts!