Resplendent rays
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. I am typically not a fan of 5-7-5 publicly but you did a nice job making the style standard with your poem. You also managed to complete your story. You had a statement, a description, and the resolution.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hello mystery writer. I am typically not a fan of 5-7-5 publicly but you did a nice job making the style standard with your poem. You also managed to complete your story. You had a statement, a description, and the resolution.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Robert thank you, the haiku is not my favorite, but I do need to dabble from time to time, thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a lovely sunny contest entry, the words and the picture are bright and cheerful, just what we want to brighten up our days. Really well written and perfect for the Haiku contest. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely sunny contest entry, the words and the picture are bright and cheerful, just what we want to brighten up our days. Really well written and perfect for the Haiku contest. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Sandra, how kind your words are, thank you!
Comment from Rmocruz
I found this pleasant nature theme to be correct in format, presenting a pleasant message. The photo-art you have selected is well complimenting.
I see a promising haiku contest entry.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I found this pleasant nature theme to be correct in format, presenting a pleasant message. The photo-art you have selected is well complimenting.
I see a promising haiku contest entry.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from smileycloud
soft vibrant images of nature especially in the words of your poem
the pictured is lovely too
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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soft vibrant images of nature especially in the words of your poem
the pictured is lovely too
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Smiling back in volumes-- thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting and spring like poem filled with sunny rays and positive vibrations for flowers that bring us delight in these uncertain times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This is an uplifting and spring like poem filled with sunny rays and positive vibrations for flowers that bring us delight in these uncertain times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Dolly, thank you. I am must share with that I am enjoying thoroughly a class I am taking with James (Jim) Barlett on rhyme. Jim introduced us to a selection of your Auld Gynt schematics as great examples. Such a pleasure to always read your work. Be well JLR
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I am glad you hear you are enjoying Jim?s classes, you will learn a lot! I am honoured by your comment here, look forward to reading more of your work, love Dolly x
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with your entry. The sun in all it's glory not only makes the flowers dance but my aged body as well. Thanks for your words of luminous color and beauty. Best regards.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Best of luck with your entry. The sun in all it's glory not only makes the flowers dance but my aged body as well. Thanks for your words of luminous color and beauty. Best regards.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Kermit, thany you.
Comment from Therese Caron
A lovely poem, extremely beautiful, especially with the number of syllables allowed. Your image is lovely, and I cannot wait to see the flowers in bloom here. Wonderful nature Haiku. God luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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A lovely poem, extremely beautiful, especially with the number of syllables allowed. Your image is lovely, and I cannot wait to see the flowers in bloom here. Wonderful nature Haiku. God luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Therese, I am so grateful for your validation. I have to say, Haiku is a bit of a stretch for my comfort zone.
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You did a great job!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I know that the sun has that effect on nature and on us. It has that revitalizing and rejuvenating effect on all that its rays seem to touch. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I know that the sun has that effect on nature and on us. It has that revitalizing and rejuvenating effect on all that its rays seem to touch. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Jeffrey, thank you good friend! I pray that you are able to take a deep breathe and breath in the all that can be found around you to make your day a special day!
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you and your family are well. This a nice nature haiku about our amazing sun, and the beautiful, studding and gorgeous flowers we see every day. Your seventeen syllables are just as impressive and dazzling. You could feel the flowers dancing in your words. Beautiful imagery. Resplendent rays is a nice title for your nature haiku. Good job. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hello,
I pray you and your family are well. This a nice nature haiku about our amazing sun, and the beautiful, studding and gorgeous flowers we see every day. Your seventeen syllables are just as impressive and dazzling. You could feel the flowers dancing in your words. Beautiful imagery. Resplendent rays is a nice title for your nature haiku. Good job. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Joyce, I am having good days, all our loved ones are blessed with good health. Thank you for for the prayers and I invoke the same prayer full content for all of your loved ones and yourself!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Raul, thanks I hope all is well in your world...
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You're welcome. All is well, my friend! Thanks! :)