You Gave Me Love
A Free Verse romance poem...13 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Not all free verse poems posted flow naturally. This one does - as it takes on a journey of love and growth. I enjoyed the sentiments and the artwork. Together it made for a lovely presentation for the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Not all free verse poems posted flow naturally. This one does - as it takes on a journey of love and growth. I enjoyed the sentiments and the artwork. Together it made for a lovely presentation for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Sorry for the delayed response June, haven't been able to get on too much lately. appreciate you enjoyed this one! xoxo
Comment from Puzzle
Wow. You better keep that one!!!! He sounds absolutely amazing and I'm super envious of your relationship. This is so beautifully written. It flowed well and that quote captured my attention
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Wow. You better keep that one!!!! He sounds absolutely amazing and I'm super envious of your relationship. This is so beautifully written. It flowed well and that quote captured my attention
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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haha!! Thank you for your encouraging review. This is my favorite style to write in and my favorite genre to write about! appreciate you enjoyed!! xoxo
Comment from LisaMay
To paraphrase the last lines in your poem: "You gave it everything when you wrote this poem."
It's got kindness, tenderness, and passion... the perfect blend.
HOWEVER.... change your image pronto because the prompt requirements quite specifically say 'no words in picture'.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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To paraphrase the last lines in your poem: "You gave it everything when you wrote this poem."
It's got kindness, tenderness, and passion... the perfect blend.
HOWEVER.... change your image pronto because the prompt requirements quite specifically say 'no words in picture'.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Oh my - well I guess I?d better pull back on my speed reading! Thank you! Will change pronto! Mwah! xoxo