Mom's Magic Vision
Guess what I just discovered?40 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Force
A loop poem, well done. Moms see everything, even when not there they see what happened. I like the premise of this one moms are super heroes; so are teachers:) Good luck. Steve
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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A loop poem, well done. Moms see everything, even when not there they see what happened. I like the premise of this one moms are super heroes; so are teachers:) Good luck. Steve
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Lol! :) You know, I got used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Thanx so much, Stephen - have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
All right , yu got me, this one is six material. It flows so easily, if fun to read and the rhyming is done in such a way it is not jerky but part of the content
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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All right , yu got me, this one is six material. It flows so easily, if fun to read and the rhyming is done in such a way it is not jerky but part of the content
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Barb - usually loops are my nemesis and there have been contests I've skipped out of frustration in trying to make it sound 'unforced', but this one just 'happened' after I cleaned up the kitchen that night -- think the Lord knew I needed something to just 'go smoothly' without questions or queries and here it is! I didn't have a lot of time and I had determined that if it was in the least starting to annoy me, I'd quit - soooo... here it is!! ;) :) Thanx for those lovely stars, my lady -- they'll make a bit of brightness midst all this rain today... :) :) Take care this week! ;) Yvette
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Mine are horrible
Comment from Susan Larson
With our three boys, we each had our own way of handling it. I had custom made cubicles in the kitchen for all their school stuff. My husband made it clear that if anything was left on the counter, he'd throw it out in the woods. He only had to do it once. I, on the other hand, decorated the den in denim blue and white so all the socks, sneakers, and even jeans just blended right in. Then in the fall, I used orange toss pillows, which blended right in with all the orange (school color) football jerseys and spirit wear. Really cute poem and well-looped.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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With our three boys, we each had our own way of handling it. I had custom made cubicles in the kitchen for all their school stuff. My husband made it clear that if anything was left on the counter, he'd throw it out in the woods. He only had to do it once. I, on the other hand, decorated the den in denim blue and white so all the socks, sneakers, and even jeans just blended right in. Then in the fall, I used orange toss pillows, which blended right in with all the orange (school color) football jerseys and spirit wear. Really cute poem and well-looped.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Amazing the things we came up with, yeah? You sound as though you and I could have written a book, Susan!! ;) :) You know, I got used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Thanx so much for your review and those wonderful stars, my lady - they'll help to make this rain a bit more bearable!! ;) :) Have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
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Raining there, too? I actually have written a book of my columns. The hard part was going through 1200 stories and narrowing them down to 75. It?s on amazon: A Word?s Worth.
Comment from Drew Delaney
The picture is not showing! Just to let you know! I am thinking how marvellous this poem worked out for you. It seems to me like you had a plan to where you wanted this to go and it worked. Well done, you awesome writer!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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The picture is not showing! Just to let you know! I am thinking how marvellous this poem worked out for you. It seems to me like you had a plan to where you wanted this to go and it worked. Well done, you awesome writer!
Drew xx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Awww... you didn't get to see my bright bold owl - got to be your browser or something because many others have commented on the owl!! ;) Sorry you missed him, but I'm glad you enjoyed, my lady! ;) Take care this week and keep on smiling out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
For years, my boys though I had an eye under my hair on the back of my head, and magic ears. They couldn't figure out how I always knew what they were doing in another room even. Ah, the magic of mothers. We all have it. Choosing the owl was appropriate. 8-)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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For years, my boys though I had an eye under my hair on the back of my head, and magic ears. They couldn't figure out how I always knew what they were doing in another room even. Ah, the magic of mothers. We all have it. Choosing the owl was appropriate. 8-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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LOL!! ;) ;) You get used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Thanx so much, Yvonne - have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Mom's Magic Vision
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Heh heh heh... I like your way of thinking...moms are magic. It's like we know what kids will do before they do it. LoL I love the presentation. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Mom's Magic Vision
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Heh heh heh... I like your way of thinking...moms are magic. It's like we know what kids will do before they do it. LoL I love the presentation. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Gypsy! :) Always so good to hear from you, my lady!! :) Take care this week! :) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Got to be a virtual 6, Yvette, it's a fabulous loop poem. Yes, my mum was much better than I ever was, and she didn't show me how to second guess my boys! I think she was on their side all the time. Why do grandmothers think they can do what they wouldn't do when they were just mothers? I really enjoyed your poem, my friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Got to be a virtual 6, Yvette, it's a fabulous loop poem. Yes, my mum was much better than I ever was, and she didn't show me how to second guess my boys! I think she was on their side all the time. Why do grandmothers think they can do what they wouldn't do when they were just mothers? I really enjoyed your poem, my friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Sandra, and your virtual is an honor, my lady!! ;) You know, usually loops are my nemesis and there have been contests I've skipped out of frustration in trying to make it sound 'unforced', but this one just 'happened' after I cleaned up the kitchen that night -- think the Lord knew I needed something to just 'go smoothly' without questions or queries and here it is! I didn't have a lot of time and I had determined that if it was in the least starting to annoy me, I'd quit - soooo... here it is!! ;) :) Hope all's well over there - you take care this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Great work here in the Loop. You see a lot when you're a mother.
Mothers are in charge of everything.
Everything that means anything.
Anything that's out of place. LOL:)Ralf
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Great work here in the Loop. You see a lot when you're a mother.
Mothers are in charge of everything.
Everything that means anything.
Anything that's out of place. LOL:)Ralf
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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LOL! :) You know, you get used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Thanx so much, my lady - have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is wonderful and superb! Not only the message but, the choice of words and phrases to describe the "magic sight" of moms'. The flow is smooth, the rhymes, a delight, the loop poem an incredible success, which all deserve an exceptional rating, no less. (I can't help but rhyme even my reviews, it seems). Your message is grand! And so underappreciated by the masses, as they turn to their mothers to solve any and everything imaginable. You put what others take for granted into a marvelous loop poem. This seems like it came easy for you; the message, the clever phrases, the ability to loop the most unusual words..but I'll bet you worked hard at it. You tell me, did this come together, seemingly seamless, as easily as it appears? The artwork of the wise owl is very appropriate for the theme. My favorite two lines are the last two, "Seems super heroes need patience: Patience with moxie supreme!" This ends with a bang, and a creative choice of words, such as "moxie." Thank you for this lighthearted leap into ideas otherwise taken for granted, and made as important as they really are!
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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This is wonderful and superb! Not only the message but, the choice of words and phrases to describe the "magic sight" of moms'. The flow is smooth, the rhymes, a delight, the loop poem an incredible success, which all deserve an exceptional rating, no less. (I can't help but rhyme even my reviews, it seems). Your message is grand! And so underappreciated by the masses, as they turn to their mothers to solve any and everything imaginable. You put what others take for granted into a marvelous loop poem. This seems like it came easy for you; the message, the clever phrases, the ability to loop the most unusual words..but I'll bet you worked hard at it. You tell me, did this come together, seemingly seamless, as easily as it appears? The artwork of the wise owl is very appropriate for the theme. My favorite two lines are the last two, "Seems super heroes need patience: Patience with moxie supreme!" This ends with a bang, and a creative choice of words, such as "moxie." Thank you for this lighthearted leap into ideas otherwise taken for granted, and made as important as they really are!
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Jesse, but there is no 'natural' for me on these things! :) ;) Usually loops are my nemesis and there have been contests I've skipped out of frustration in trying to make it sound 'unforced', but this one just 'happened' after I cleaned up the kitchen that night -- think the Lord knew I needed something to just 'go smoothly' without questions or queries and here it is! I didn't have a lot of time and I had determined that if it was in the least starting to annoy me, I'd quit - soooo... here it is!! ;) :) And I couldn't pass up the owl when I went looking for a pic - love owls to start with and he's so 'bright and bold' ... just the way I like things!! ;) Hope all's well out there on the coast- you take care this week, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley McLain
An excellent poem that I enjoyed reading. Yes, mothers do see when things are out of place. I didn't find any mistakes. You did a wonderful job. Take care and stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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An excellent poem that I enjoyed reading. Yes, mothers do see when things are out of place. I didn't find any mistakes. You did a wonderful job. Take care and stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Shirley -- you know, you get used to 'nobody' around except the husband that leaves things, but now... lol! :) :) Have a wonderful week ahead, my lady! ;) Yvette
