Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Hi, guys!

A good chapter for your story. You two definitely have a 'style'. *smile* This was fun, though I had a wee problem with the parts where you spoke for God. But that's just me. Others may not even mention it.

some notes for you to check on:
1.) Jesus will explain to you the re(a)sons why someday at

2.) "Wow! Quite an astonishing site to behold, Bret!"
--> do you mean 'site' as in this is a 'site' to visit? or
--> 'sight' to see?

Thanks!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

Happy Easter, Robyn! Thanks for the Excellent review, kind words, help, and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an awesome writer (YOU) to express admiration for our presentation. A "SALUTE!" As always, best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.

reply by robyn corum on 12-Apr-2020

Thanks, friend! Happy Easter to you, too!

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

A 2nd "SALUTE!"

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Thank goodness Angel's mother is alright! I love how you go back and forth bringing memories from the past, it brings a wonderful normalcy to your story. Angel and Bret have been a couple since they were children, boyfriend and girlfriend, aww, that is so sweet. Now more problems have arisen, how do they get our of that cave, is there another way out? You have the best cliff hangers on the site! Well done, can't wait to read more. :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020

Greetings, Sandra! Are you looking? A "SALUTE" from Cathy . . . and a "SALUTE" from me! As you well know, It is an honor having an "AWESOME WRITER (YOU)" to express admiration for our work. So, we have the best cliff hangers on the site, huh? For your information, "God makes us do it--goody, goody!" Chapter 5 will arrive soon. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Two innovative heads join together now produce fantasy work even more fanciful, fantastic and fabulous, supernatural stunts, angel's advent, birthday celebration, locked down in cave; well said, well done

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020

Greetings, friend! Let us begin with a "SALUTE!" Thank you for the "Excellent review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work." It is an honor having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for our work. I reviewed "What's Truth?" May I say, "YOU DID IT GOD's way!" It is an "ASTONISHING PENNING!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy (Tootie) and Bill (Commando).