An Angel in the Meadow
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Commando. Since I speak Blue Ridge, Smoky Mountain is a dialect of that or vice versa. The brown recluse bit is truly a nasty one. I hope that's not what happened here. The dialogue between Bret and Angel tells the story very well.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello Commando. Since I speak Blue Ridge, Smoky Mountain is a dialect of that or vice versa. The brown recluse bit is truly a nasty one. I hope that's not what happened here. The dialogue between Bret and Angel tells the story very well.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Robert!
Anywhere around Cherokee, NC? Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for our work. As always, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
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Hey Commando. You're welcome.
I'm closer to Boone.
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A 2nd "SALUTE," my friend!
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Back to You.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Is this book an autobiography? Also is this chapter a trip down the memory lane? Am i going with this in the right direction? Angel is praying for Bret to be saved remembers how they met and what they promised each other. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Is this book an autobiography? Also is this chapter a trip down the memory lane? Am i going with this in the right direction? Angel is praying for Bret to be saved remembers how they met and what they promised each other. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Iza!
In answer to your questions, please read chapters 1 and 2. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. It is an honor having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for our work. As always, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Commando and Tootie: great writing skills of a time ago. I like how
he loves Angels and she loves his stories. Too bad about the spider. They are colorful and deadly. Times were different then. Now, we worry about
the corona flue. We value family times together. Nice writing about
prayers. I'll fly in again, soon. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Commando and Tootie: great writing skills of a time ago. I like how
he loves Angels and she loves his stories. Too bad about the spider. They are colorful and deadly. Times were different then. Now, we worry about
the corona flue. We value family times together. Nice writing about
prayers. I'll fly in again, soon. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," our dear friend! It's great hearing from you. We're happy to hear you say, "Great writing skills!" Of course, it's plain. . . "You just made our day"--hurrah! Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. May we recommend chapters 1 and 2. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Brown Recluse!
Hello Commando,
How are you doing? I like your love story. The characters are well developed. The theme of the story is very interesting and funny at times. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A Brown Recluse!
Hello Commando,
How are you doing? I like your love story. The characters are well developed. The theme of the story is very interesting and funny at times. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Gypsy! Great having you back with the family. We on FanStory have missed your awesome writing. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. May we recommend chapters 1 and 2. Best wishes for a great weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
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A "SALUTE!"
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
They really are so head over heels in love with each other! So passionate and even dramatic in their love and how constantly the invoke God to be a witness of their love is just heartening to read! A well written chapter all round! Best wishes for the coming chapters! :-)
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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They really are so head over heels in love with each other! So passionate and even dramatic in their love and how constantly the invoke God to be a witness of their love is just heartening to read! A well written chapter all round! Best wishes for the coming chapters! :-)
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," our dear friend! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which are an honor. Thanks for the "Best wishes for the coming chapters." May we recommend chapters l and 2. Have an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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You are most welcome! I?ll be sure to catch up on them! :-)
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A 2nd "SALUTE," our dear friend! Cathy and Bill