Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Many of your stories are based partially on fact. I;m curious if Jim's wife really died. As usual I see your work as written by a terrific writer. In your two act plays you often know a lot about what the first narrator would say and then you channel the second one. You claim to be an atheist but seem to deal with this subject often. I find that odd. Maybe you're an agnostic?

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020

Hi Beth. Jim is based on my Best Man, a Christian widower, but Diana is based on me. Chuck intends to convert me on my deathbed--to which I responded--how will you know whether it was genuine or just to comfort you. Indeed I deal with the subject often; I am tormented by the prospect that God exists given I consider him to be monstrous. (As you read a few weeks ago in my two-part piece headed by a WARNING WRIT LARGE.) Cheers. LIZ

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

I like this post because it shows you are thinking.

I do not believe that consciousness is snuffed out at death. The soul lives on with all the knowledge we gained before death. No one will be in the least concerned with others after death because the main focus will be on Jesus.

The light some people see is Jesus because He is the light. Hell is darkness because Jesus is not there.

Some day I may write about an operation I had where I suppose I died. I had an out of body experience, saw the bright light at the end, and was at utter peace...

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020

Thanks for reading this--originally released before your time--I'm promoting prior works so that my loyal fans can get paid. Cheers. LIZ

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 19-Jun-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I know lots of atheist that return to God, after something major happened and I know that the smile it's a proof that she accepted God. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020

Thanks Iza. That sure was quick! Interesting interpretation of the ending. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Sooooo.... is there a third act? A way to look into one or the other's next steps...? A very interesting he said/she said presentation, LIZ -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

Thanks Yvette. Regarding a third act? Depends on whether Jesus wants to step up to the plate. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Gideon300

Excellent

Yeah, well it seems like Jim was justified in questioning Diana's sincerity, as for Diana she might have fooled Jim (kind of) but not Jesus.
Great story told by two perspectives. This was a very engaging story.


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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

You got that right, Gideon. Perhaps there will be a third act if Jesus decides to make an appearance. Cheers. LIZ