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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello barbara.wilkey (Barb)
Ah you have an what I call an intriguing chapter to read.
I'm wondering why Slogan is so intense studding the bulletin board when McKenzie is sleeping. I feel the mystery soon will come into existence.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Hello barbara.wilkey (Barb)
Ah you have an what I call an intriguing chapter to read.
I'm wondering why Slogan is so intense studding the bulletin board when McKenzie is sleeping. I feel the mystery soon will come into existence.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I think he's trying to figure out the solution. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Sankey
You are still churning out these great chapters. I can't wait to see one or more of your stories taken up for a movie or mini-series. Now for spag and suggestion time. After background I (am)happy to announce
"Where (are??)you going with this?"
he's dealing (and) wants to be
Parks(') dirty work.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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You are still churning out these great chapters. I can't wait to see one or more of your stories taken up for a movie or mini-series. Now for spag and suggestion time. After background I (am)happy to announce
"Where (are??)you going with this?"
he's dealing (and) wants to be
Parks(') dirty work.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the catches. I really do edit. These mistakes were amateurish. Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Mackenzie finds herself awake in the middle of the night, to a light on downstairs and goes down to discover Logan working on something or other from the bulletin board, Mackenzie has worked out a theory about the murder concerning Parks and Megan, and comes up with something plausible, well done Barbara, excellent episode, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Mackenzie finds herself awake in the middle of the night, to a light on downstairs and goes down to discover Logan working on something or other from the bulletin board, Mackenzie has worked out a theory about the murder concerning Parks and Megan, and comes up with something plausible, well done Barbara, excellent episode, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Welcome Barbara,
Comment from judiverse
I like the light-hearted moments in this. It looks like Mac has really come up with a plausible scenario. Parks is undoubtedly involved, and he sounds like he's capable of doing what Mac suggests, as he's already proven to be a liar. Logan has trouble accepting that her sister could have become involved in anything shady, but if that's where the evidence leads, he'll probably accept it. I'm also wondering if someone else in the police department is also involved, there seems to have been so much delay in getting information and they seem well informed about what Mac is doing. Congratulations on your new book. I'll be looking for it on Amazon. judi
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I like the light-hearted moments in this. It looks like Mac has really come up with a plausible scenario. Parks is undoubtedly involved, and he sounds like he's capable of doing what Mac suggests, as he's already proven to be a liar. Logan has trouble accepting that her sister could have become involved in anything shady, but if that's where the evidence leads, he'll probably accept it. I'm also wondering if someone else in the police department is also involved, there seems to have been so much delay in getting information and they seem well informed about what Mac is doing. Congratulations on your new book. I'll be looking for it on Amazon. judi
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and looking for my new book. I appreciate both.
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You're welcome. Much success with your newly published book! judi
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, Oh, they do keep up flirting but either Mckenzie is a bit thick or she pretends not to notice that Logan is besotted with her. I hope she wakes up soon. All best. Ulla x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hi Barbara, Oh, they do keep up flirting but either Mckenzie is a bit thick or she pretends not to notice that Logan is besotted with her. I hope she wakes up soon. All best. Ulla x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I think she will. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is good writing. I'm enjoying your mystery as it progresses toward solving the crime. I like the interaction between McKenzie and Logan. Congratulation on book you have on Amazon. The one I was reading before I left FanStory was a Southern mystery about a haunted house and a Cival War ghost. I'm not sure I finished it. What Happened to that one?
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This is good writing. I'm enjoying your mystery as it progresses toward solving the crime. I like the interaction between McKenzie and Logan. Congratulation on book you have on Amazon. The one I was reading before I left FanStory was a Southern mystery about a haunted house and a Cival War ghost. I'm not sure I finished it. What Happened to that one?
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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'Secrets of my Confederate Solider' is also be sold on Amazon. Thank you for asking and for the kind review.
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I'm happy to hear that and to know the title. I don't think that was the original title. Your are a prolific writer.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
This was a good chapter in the story and I liked both the flirtatious start and ending as well! I am starting to root for those two! And Logan offered a good theory about what happened to her sister as well! All in all...well written!
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This was a good chapter in the story and I liked both the flirtatious start and ending as well! I am starting to root for those two! And Logan offered a good theory about what happened to her sister as well! All in all...well written!
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
