Burnt Wings
A 3-5-3 on passion12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Good job with the daily writing prompt entry for the 3/5/3 passion contest. Your syllable count is right. The poem is about passion. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Good job with the daily writing prompt entry for the 3/5/3 passion contest. Your syllable count is right. The poem is about passion. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy ! Once again a five star from you. I feel happy.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Wow! That is great perception.
It could refer to burning out before the goal of success is achieved. At least, that is how I see it.
Another thing, it might be when goals are set too high, and achieving seems impossible and one give's up.
In any case, well done.
Drew
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Wow! That is great perception.
It could refer to burning out before the goal of success is achieved. At least, that is how I see it.
Another thing, it might be when goals are set too high, and achieving seems impossible and one give's up.
In any case, well done.
Drew
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Drew. That was quick! I only posted it a minute again.
