Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Honeymoon"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Firstly, I must point out the start of 3rd para...I hesitate here...kindly that part about a random 'three' in there!
This chapter was beautifully written as well! I suppose it good of you to just state the facts about the honeymoon and that night without things getting steamy! You managed that awkward but necessary part of the story really well in my opinion!
I am loving your work and already waiting for the next one! Cheers :-)
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Firstly, I must point out the start of 3rd para...I hesitate here...kindly that part about a random 'three' in there!
This chapter was beautifully written as well! I suppose it good of you to just state the facts about the honeymoon and that night without things getting steamy! You managed that awkward but necessary part of the story really well in my opinion!
I am loving your work and already waiting for the next one! Cheers :-)
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for continuing to read and comment on this story. I'm so glad you like it. Thanks also for catching the error. I will correct it immediately.
Beth
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You are most welcome! :-)
