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Faith healing (dialogue only )

Should have gone to the pub instead

17 total reviews 
Comment from pome lover
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now, that is good, 60 word story telling!
also made me laugh.
I was thinking of entering this contest, but think you've got a winner here.
Best wishes!
(heck. might enter just for fun.)
then again...? :)
pome lover

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks a lot.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Yep, some blind shall never see... :) :) :) A humorous yet thought-provoking offering for the Dash today -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Many thanks for the review.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Dancemom
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Haha. This cracked me up. Very clever ending. This was a well written story perfect for the 60 words or less contest. Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks a lot Dancemom. I was a dancemom too.
Comment from May 1
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Haha, that's quite a fun approach to the topic, wonderfully written. I really enjoyed reading it and love the way you chose to approach this writing prompt. It is an amazing entry.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Lol, as a Pastor at my church I'll have to remember that one. Sounds like the great Yogi Berra "always go to every one's funeral otherwise they won't go to yours".

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks a lot for the fun review.
Comment from papa55mike
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What a wonderfully written little story and Iove the picture. Please check your last paragraph, you need quotations at the beginning.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    God bless you too. Many thanks.
Comment from rspoet
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Ha, ha. This is an excellent flash story for the contest
with a very good twist at the end.
I think you want a cap. on "Even" at the end.
Nicely done. This should do well in the contest.
Good luck.
Robert


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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Many thanks Robert. So glad you like it.