Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Drew me right in. Great humor:...not attractive, but he was alive...(do I hear the sound of "settling" ladies?)...ankle bracelet looks like leg brace..high morals...despite slightly roving hands...Cheers. LIZ (Connie Frances s/b Francis...s/b Justice of THE Peace..either shared bonds OR had common bonds)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020

Thanks so much for the review and comments. I'm glad you found some humor. I appreciate the correction.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

A very nice journalling type piece. I enjoyed reading about your relationship with your mother and boyfriend. It is an active chapter and has excellent writing and dialogue. Shirley

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020

Thank you so much for your review. I'd like to be able to use more dialogue but since I'm narrating the story, too much might not work.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I continue to enjoy this biography. I love how you are presenting it and enjoy the detailed descriptions of not being sure if you were in love. I am sure many born in the era we lived will know exactly how you felt. As always, I anxiously look forward to the next chapter. I would have given you a 6 if I had any left. I used them up quickly.

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020

Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying this. I used all my sixes up to. I appreciate the thought.

reply by Sasha on 08-Feb-2020

You are welcome.

reply by Sasha on 08-Feb-2020

Yup, you are right.