Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Early Courtship and Graduation"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Beth. Personal stories are sometimes hard to relate because of course there are so many personal memories within the story. Your story moves along beautifully. If I could offer anything it would be that in that last sentence I believe you left the "of" out of your sentence. "I was one [of] them who ...", otherwise a wonderful read for me tonight. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hi Beth. Personal stories are sometimes hard to relate because of course there are so many personal memories within the story. Your story moves along beautifully. If I could offer anything it would be that in that last sentence I believe you left the "of" out of your sentence. "I was one [of] them who ...", otherwise a wonderful read for me tonight. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much nice review and comments. I especially appreciate you finding the word I missed. I will correct it.
