Our Mischief
We weren't looking, but there you were16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sweet comforting words, especially for this lucky little fellow to have found a home where someone cares, the golden lottery ticket held by the cat here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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These are sweet comforting words, especially for this lucky little fellow to have found a home where someone cares, the golden lottery ticket held by the cat here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!!
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this heart-felt piece. Cats make such lovely companions don't they? They're my grandma's favourite animals. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Congratulations on this heart-felt piece. Cats make such lovely companions don't they? They're my grandma's favourite animals. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest on cats
with a warmth many will relate to on fanstory.
Perfect picture to match your poem.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest on cats
with a warmth many will relate to on fanstory.
Perfect picture to match your poem.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a sweet entry for the cats 575 poetry contest. Your words of life's lottery prize illustrate the love you have for your kitty. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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This is a sweet entry for the cats 575 poetry contest. Your words of life's lottery prize illustrate the love you have for your kitty. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you Heather!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this 5-7-5. The poem and artwork combination create a charming scene and send a strong message about how a cat can brighten a life.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this 5-7-5. The poem and artwork combination create a charming scene and send a strong message about how a cat can brighten a life.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you Janice!
Comment from K Dono
That is such an adorable picture that you chose to go with this poem. I love that this kitty has brought such warmth into your life. This is soft and welcoming which isn't always the case with cats. I enjoyed this!
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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That is such an adorable picture that you chose to go with this poem. I love that this kitty has brought such warmth into your life. This is soft and welcoming which isn't always the case with cats. I enjoyed this!
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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I appreciate your review. Could you please explain what adjustments need to be made as your rating is defined as 'Good - adjustments needed' according to the FanStory ratings definitions. I would like to understand what you think needs to be fixed... thank you so much!
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I'm sorry, I changed it, I thought I had hit the 5 star.
