Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spinning, Twisting, Turning"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Patty Palmer
Well, this is a bit different. You say it's abstract poetry. Great! It may be abstract but I could understand what you were saying easily. I do like your poem very much!
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Well, this is a bit different. You say it's abstract poetry. Great! It may be abstract but I could understand what you were saying easily. I do like your poem very much!
Patty
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Patty, I value your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of art work. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
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You're very welcome!
Patty
Comment from Dancemom
This is a clever and unique entry for the abstract art poetry contest. You have vividly told a story through the picture you chose. Your use of repetition adds to the intensity of your poem and flows well with the picture. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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This is a clever and unique entry for the abstract art poetry contest. You have vividly told a story through the picture you chose. Your use of repetition adds to the intensity of your poem and flows well with the picture. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Heather, thank you! I value your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of art work. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
Comment from Fonda Little
Great picture you used to go with this poem! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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Great picture you used to go with this poem! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Fonda, I value your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of art work. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
Comment from kahpot
Yes with all the ups and downs going on in our lives it is sometimes easy to think we are the only ones in the world, whether we have troubles or are happy, an excellent read, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Yes with all the ups and downs going on in our lives it is sometimes easy to think we are the only ones in the world, whether we have troubles or are happy, an excellent read, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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kahpot, I value your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of artwork. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
Comment from Minglement
This is a great entry for this abstract art contest. It could well have been inspired by the abstract illustration accompanying it. I loved almost repeated first line with just a slight variance. It flowed well and had a great message.
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This is a great entry for this abstract art contest. It could well have been inspired by the abstract illustration accompanying it. I loved almost repeated first line with just a slight variance. It flowed well and had a great message.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Minglement, I value your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of artwork. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
Comment from Bichon
I really like how you used all methods of describing the type of angle at the start of each stanza. Your poem really came to life with your use of great language and structure!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I really like how you used all methods of describing the type of angle at the start of each stanza. Your poem really came to life with your use of great language and structure!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Bichon, thank you for your review and comments. FanArt offers such content-rich selections of artwork. It is always a pleasure to explore an offering to marry with words.
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent a great example of how the repetition is effective in all stanzas and not just some. It displays a momentary and uplifting idea with the sounds of repetition used giving more depth of feeling and extending the emotion on the last line of the stanza. It has a finesse and eloquence redeemed within the conclusion whereby relevance is constituted and confirmed.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Excellent a great example of how the repetition is effective in all stanzas and not just some. It displays a momentary and uplifting idea with the sounds of repetition used giving more depth of feeling and extending the emotion on the last line of the stanza. It has a finesse and eloquence redeemed within the conclusion whereby relevance is constituted and confirmed.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I thank you for your validation and please to rad the caught the bus!
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anytime dude ...
Comment from royowen
I guess one could look at this abstract art and see that within its twisting, winding and skilful, projection are all these cryptic verses, these things are happening. Well done, there's no correct or incorrect interpretation of these things, but yours is a good one. Written in predictive triplets as aba rhyming, this is articulate and good, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I guess one could look at this abstract art and see that within its twisting, winding and skilful, projection are all these cryptic verses, these things are happening. Well done, there's no correct or incorrect interpretation of these things, but yours is a good one. Written in predictive triplets as aba rhyming, this is articulate and good, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Roy, I do thank you very much for your comments
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the spinning globe we live on and a great abstract photo to interpret the spinning globe. We all have a part in the decay of the earth in one or other way.
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A very well-written poem about the spinning globe we live on and a great abstract photo to interpret the spinning globe. We all have a part in the decay of the earth in one or other way.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Sandra, I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Spinning, Twisting, Turning"
Is an Abstract Art poem contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
M..
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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"Spinning, Twisting, Turning"
Is an Abstract Art poem contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
M..
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Doctor Ricky 1024 I thought this FS art very good subject material to work with, thank you for reading and commenting. Thank you for the good wishes!
