~Someday~
Together Forever!57 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Bill, this is truly beautiful and so well written. Your craftsmanship is superbly fluent and romantically expressed. This is a joy to read and savor. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Bill, this is truly beautiful and so well written. Your craftsmanship is superbly fluent and romantically expressed. This is a joy to read and savor. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Melissa!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Commando (Bill), a terrific Thursday to you, I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing that deeply personal poem and dedication to your beloved wife. The words were so heartfelt and touching, I'm sure she's smiling down as she watches over you. Great job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day my friend!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hello Commando (Bill), a terrific Thursday to you, I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing that deeply personal poem and dedication to your beloved wife. The words were so heartfelt and touching, I'm sure she's smiling down as she watches over you. Great job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day my friend!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Bill,
Fantastic Piece of Romance Poetry drenched in love from top to bottom!
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
SUPERB!
BEST OF LUCK!!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hello Bill,
Fantastic Piece of Romance Poetry drenched in love from top to bottom!
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
SUPERB!
BEST OF LUCK!!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," RP!
Thanks for the "EXCEPTIONAL" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor, my dear friend. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Bill, Most Welcome!
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Thanks for Good Wishes + Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from padumachitta
hi a lovely tribute to your wife.
The craft of the poem was good, with word choice that reflected the theme and.
I found no SPAG. The cadence was also even throughout.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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hi a lovely tribute to your wife.
The craft of the poem was good, with word choice that reflected the theme and.
I found no SPAG. The cadence was also even throughout.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would appreciate your following along. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Michele Antle
What an amazing dedication. Imagery is truly on point. Your words reveal your true love for someone you may miss "physically" although you have not expressed any pain because your faith shines with hope of togetherness forever. I truly enjoyed you expression of love for your wife shining through your words.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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What an amazing dedication. Imagery is truly on point. Your words reveal your true love for someone you may miss "physically" although you have not expressed any pain because your faith shines with hope of togetherness forever. I truly enjoyed you expression of love for your wife shining through your words.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Michele!
Thanks for the review, (why the 4-star?) kind words and taking the time to read my work. I see you are new to Fan Story. It is an honor meeting you. FYI, when you award less than a 5-star review, please give the reason why. . . and recommendation(s) for improvement. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from pharp
This is such a beautifully written poem that you have dedicated to your wife. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth fllow allowing for a most enjoyable read Yes, I did shed some tears while reading your poem and author's note. The very best to you in the contest and thanks for sharing... Blessings.....Portia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This is such a beautifully written poem that you have dedicated to your wife. Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth fllow allowing for a most enjoyable read Yes, I did shed some tears while reading your poem and author's note. The very best to you in the contest and thanks for sharing... Blessings.....Portia
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Portia!
It's an honor meeting you. Thanks for the "EXCEPTIONAL" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would appreciate your following along. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Bill,
Back at you! It's an honor to meet you as well. I would love to follow along and read more of your work. Blessings and you have a wonderful weekend as well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Beautifully and wonderfully well written! I felt emotion and intellect of love throughout the poem. Rhythm and rhyme, concepts and ideas, felt genuine and were very visually appealing. giovanni
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Beautifully and wonderfully well written! I felt emotion and intellect of love throughout the poem. Rhythm and rhyme, concepts and ideas, felt genuine and were very visually appealing. giovanni
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Giovanni!
It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would appreciate your following along. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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You are most welcome. giovanni
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
She's up there waiting for you my friend. I will treasure my Valentine this year for sure, this was certainly a good reminder. You did a great job and I wouldn't change a thing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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She's up there waiting for you my friend. I will treasure my Valentine this year for sure, this was certainly a good reminder. You did a great job and I wouldn't change a thing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Commando
You have a beautiful Poem about how you miss your loved one
( your wife). I like how you used a rhyme your rhyming pattern of ab ab. I must tell the part my tears turned to a smile--
Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart.
What God has joined together, will never break apart.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello Commando
You have a beautiful Poem about how you miss your loved one
( your wife). I like how you used a rhyme your rhyming pattern of ab ab. I must tell the part my tears turned to a smile--
Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart.
What God has joined together, will never break apart.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello Gert,
A "Salute," my dear friend! Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. As always, "It is an honor!" Great hearing from you, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Hello Commando,
You are welcome. Gert
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Smiles to You Commando you are welcome. Gert
Comment from Gracie619
Thank you for sharing this very personal and lovely piece. You truly have a gift for words, as I found tears in the corner of my eyes as I finished and founding a need to read this again. I liked the idea of "eat supper with Jesus." It made me stop and imagine what that would be like! Take care.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing this very personal and lovely piece. You truly have a gift for words, as I found tears in the corner of my eyes as I finished and founding a need to read this again. I liked the idea of "eat supper with Jesus." It made me stop and imagine what that would be like! Take care.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Gracie!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter's 1 - 19 are on her "Profile." It would be an honor having you follow along. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill