Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Threads of Life"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author,
of the Lovely poem an colorful graphic and written in free.
Is well written and tells us from our birth until we retire.
Note; You thoughts about when God takes us in His abode
are excellent
We do joyously acknowledge we have no regrets or no sorrows,
because in this life, we have partaken our share and fully consumed.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello unknown author,
of the Lovely poem an colorful graphic and written in free.
Is well written and tells us from our birth until we retire.
Note; You thoughts about when God takes us in His abode
are excellent
We do joyously acknowledge we have no regrets or no sorrows,
because in this life, we have partaken our share and fully consumed.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Gert, thank you for the validation.
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Hello JLR you are welcome
Gert
Comment from Diana L Crawford
What a wonderful tale of life from beginning to retirement and all the changes that happen in between! it really is hard though to let our children raise their own as now we have so much more experience at it, that it is hard not to offer our advise! thanks for sharing your story! xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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What a wonderful tale of life from beginning to retirement and all the changes that happen in between! it really is hard though to let our children raise their own as now we have so much more experience at it, that it is hard not to offer our advise! thanks for sharing your story! xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Diana, thank you for the kind validation.
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So welcome!
Comment from May 1
This is such a wonderfully written poem with quite an interesting perspective. It is really fun to read and it so powerful. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This is such a wonderfully written poem with quite an interesting perspective. It is really fun to read and it so powerful. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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May, thank you for the kind validation.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so nice, that you can get to your retirement years with no regrets. Your poem gives us an open picture of your lives together through the years. It's a lovely contest entry. Well done and good luck.:)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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That is so nice, that you can get to your retirement years with no regrets. Your poem gives us an open picture of your lives together through the years. It's a lovely contest entry. Well done and good luck.:)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Sandra, thank you for the kind validation.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a heartfelt story about the circle of life and it paints a vivid picture of a child who grows up, gets married, has child, and the story starts again. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This is a heartfelt story about the circle of life and it paints a vivid picture of a child who grows up, gets married, has child, and the story starts again. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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thank you for the kind validation.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
What a grand entry into this contest. It's quite wonderful how you have summed up an entire lifetime in 5 stanzas and 20 lines. If only life were as easy lol. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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What a grand entry into this contest. It's quite wonderful how you have summed up an entire lifetime in 5 stanzas and 20 lines. If only life were as easy lol. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Kiwi, thank you for the kind validation.
Comment from Minglement
Wow, you managed to cover all the stages of life with its ups and downs into so few words and stanzas. I loved your opening lines and your chosen artwork as well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Wow, you managed to cover all the stages of life with its ups and downs into so few words and stanzas. I loved your opening lines and your chosen artwork as well. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Minglement, thank you for the kind validation.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Tina Crute
Your poem is an excellent
Entry for the contest! You
seamlessly go through the stages of life until you present your philosophy at the end. You ate fully of life and have no regrets.
Great write!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Your poem is an excellent
Entry for the contest! You
seamlessly go through the stages of life until you present your philosophy at the end. You ate fully of life and have no regrets.
Great write!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Tina, thank you for the kind validation.
Comment from zlp22
Interesting story about life that many of us live. It can be boring but we have to make the most of it. Good luck in the contest. To continue living a good life we always have to try harder.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Interesting story about life that many of us live. It can be boring but we have to make the most of it. Good luck in the contest. To continue living a good life we always have to try harder.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the validation.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent entry into the contest, author. There is much wisdom in your poem and the line I found particularly informative was we learned we are loved the more we cry.
You worked right from the start of life to a comfortable late September and no regrets for a life well-lived.
Very nicely done, indeed and I wish you great luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Excellent entry into the contest, author. There is much wisdom in your poem and the line I found particularly informative was we learned we are loved the more we cry.
You worked right from the start of life to a comfortable late September and no regrets for a life well-lived.
Very nicely done, indeed and I wish you great luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I am so grateful for your validation, Gloria, thank you so much!
