Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a unique entry for the teacup contest. It well meets all the requirements. The words made me stop and think and the image you chose is an excellent complement.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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This is a unique entry for the teacup contest. It well meets all the requirements. The words made me stop and think and the image you chose is an excellent complement.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you Susan!
Comment from Susan Larson
The tea cup dictionary poem is totally new to me. I had to do a bit of reading up on this one but in my humble opinion, you fulfilled the requirements very well and did an excellent job with indistinguishabiliy.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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The tea cup dictionary poem is totally new to me. I had to do a bit of reading up on this one but in my humble opinion, you fulfilled the requirements very well and did an excellent job with indistinguishabiliy.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Susan, thank you very much!
Comment from crzypnter
What a interesting concept for a poem. Therefore I must admit to looking up exactly what this tea cup dictionary challenge was. I think you did a wonderful job and credit must be given when due. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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What a interesting concept for a poem. Therefore I must admit to looking up exactly what this tea cup dictionary challenge was. I think you did a wonderful job and credit must be given when due. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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August, I am so appreciative of your six-star review. Thank you, very much!
Comment from Alchera
I like the idea and recognized the difficulty or filling the given format.
A good characterization of oneself throughout the research of the right selection and chosen words to fulfil the twenty years celebration site cup. A good job,.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I like the idea and recognized the difficulty or filling the given format.
A good characterization of oneself throughout the research of the right selection and chosen words to fulfil the twenty years celebration site cup. A good job,.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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Welcome!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent you described your lead word with great image, and reflections a wonderful teacup poem very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Excellent you described your lead word with great image, and reflections a wonderful teacup poem very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the tea cup poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have described the word indistinguishability very well. Best of luck. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the tea cup poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have described the word indistinguishability very well. Best of luck. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Tina Crute
Your picture grabbed my interest immediately. Your teacup poem took me a couple reads to get all the good stuff from it! For a short poem, it packs a mindful punch! Its a poem someone will think about long after.
Tina
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Your picture grabbed my interest immediately. Your teacup poem took me a couple reads to get all the good stuff from it! For a short poem, it packs a mindful punch! Its a poem someone will think about long after.
Tina
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello JLR
Thank you for telling us here on Fanstory
what is a Teacup Dictionary Poem and the quality of being identical with itself with your word
with eight syllables in-dis-tin-guish-a-bil-i-ty are like twins that are impossible to tell apart.
Best to you in the contest. Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello JLR
Thank you for telling us here on Fanstory
what is a Teacup Dictionary Poem and the quality of being identical with itself with your word
with eight syllables in-dis-tin-guish-a-bil-i-ty are like twins that are impossible to tell apart.
Best to you in the contest. Gert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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You are welcome JLR
Gert
Comment from susand3022
Hi J, I had to look up a Teacup Dictionary poem and how to do that. How interesting! I've never done one before... I'll have to try one. You must be glad of Google... I would have had the dickens of a time thinking of 20-letter words! You found a good one, and did a great job with it! :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hi J, I had to look up a Teacup Dictionary poem and how to do that. How interesting! I've never done one before... I'll have to try one. You must be glad of Google... I would have had the dickens of a time thinking of 20-letter words! You found a good one, and did a great job with it! :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from heavenempress
hi, excellent piece of work. I liked the long word that made up your first word of your poem. Simple but powerful, I liked it. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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hi, excellent piece of work. I liked the long word that made up your first word of your poem. Simple but powerful, I liked it. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Heavenempress, I thank you for the validation and support.
