Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Hurrah, Commando! - Chapter 15"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Tootie. You've left us hanging before but you will get it straightened out. When I served in the late 60's our counterinsurgency training for VN was at Ft. Polk, LA. I'm still reading. Robert
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Hello Tootie. You've left us hanging before but you will get it straightened out. When I served in the late 60's our counterinsurgency training for VN was at Ft. Polk, LA. I'm still reading. Robert
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Hi Robert. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. So glad you are continuing to follow along. Your ongoing support and comments are greatly appreciated. Did you know Louisiana has the highest population of alligators? We'll see if Bill can get outta this one! Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you an awesome weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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You're welcome
Comment from CrystieCookie999
It is impossible to fall asleep reading these selections. With this line: I wish I had some mint leaves with me,
I immediately thought of the spearmint and catnip plants growing in the backyard. The black cherry picking also reminded me of a summer harvest not long past. It sounds like life picked up in velocity a huge leap with the appearance of quicksand and an alligator, it seems. With this line:
Damn, they're all still green!" I muttered
I think you wanted another quotation mark in front of the word "Damn in the first part. Bill/Billy is going to get a miracle, I hope.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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It is impossible to fall asleep reading these selections. With this line: I wish I had some mint leaves with me,
I immediately thought of the spearmint and catnip plants growing in the backyard. The black cherry picking also reminded me of a summer harvest not long past. It sounds like life picked up in velocity a huge leap with the appearance of quicksand and an alligator, it seems. With this line:
Damn, they're all still green!" I muttered
I think you wanted another quotation mark in front of the word "Damn in the first part. Bill/Billy is going to get a miracle, I hope.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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HI CrystieCookie999! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're sorry it gave you insomnia! :) Thank you also for your continued support. It means a lot to us that you are following along and enjoying the story. The next chapter is in the works and coming soon, so catch up on some sleep while you can. LOL! Good suggestion re: adding another exclamation mark. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
you already know how much I like your story. I sure hope Commando gets away from the alligator. A vicious animal indeed! And the unexpected stomach up chucking...I'll find out in the next chapter for your answer.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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you already know how much I like your story. I sure hope Commando gets away from the alligator. A vicious animal indeed! And the unexpected stomach up chucking...I'll find out in the next chapter for your answer.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Hi Rosemary! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support is greatly appreciated and means so much. You won't have to wait long for the next chapter. It's already in the works and coming soon. We're glad you like our story! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You always leave us hanging in the direst of circumstances! This part was really excellent writing, you both compliment each other so well. Now all we have to worry about is the alligator! I was surprised at those lads running off the way they did, even though Bill told them too. You don't do that! You make sure you're all there when you leave. They've a lot to learn still!! Well done, another excellent part. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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You always leave us hanging in the direst of circumstances! This part was really excellent writing, you both compliment each other so well. Now all we have to worry about is the alligator! I was surprised at those lads running off the way they did, even though Bill told them too. You don't do that! You make sure you're all there when you leave. They've a lot to learn still!! Well done, another excellent part. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Hi Sandra! Your continued support is greatly appreciated! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. Glad you found the writing excellent. Your comment about us complimenting each other well means a lot to us, too. We'll see what happens to Bill in the next chapter. It's already in the works and coming soon. God Bless!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from JudyE
I enjoyed this chapter very much. The story is moving along nicely and the language seems authentic. I hope you don't leave us waiting too long to find out what happens to Bill. I didn't find anything to suggest that would improve it.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. The story is moving along nicely and the language seems authentic. I hope you don't leave us waiting too long to find out what happens to Bill. I didn't find anything to suggest that would improve it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Hi Judy! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you also for your continued support. It means a great deal to us. You won't have to wait too long for the next chapter. It's already in the works and coming soon. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Teri7
This is another very well written chapter my friend. You used very good descriptive words and very good dialogue. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is another very well written chapter my friend. You used very good descriptive words and very good dialogue. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Teri! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're glad you enjoyed it, and you found it well written with good dialogue. Hurrah! Your comments are so kind. Thank you also for your continued support. It means a lot to us! Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon, so stay tuned. Wishing you an awesome week! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Darlene Franklin
These are going through the wringer before they'll ever be back together.
Chased by a croc bef0re he even leaves the States! Her pregnant, without him close byl She's lucky to have the g randparents.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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These are going through the wringer before they'll ever be back together.
Chased by a croc bef0re he even leaves the States! Her pregnant, without him close byl She's lucky to have the g randparents.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Darlene! Thank you for the EXCEPTIONAL six star rating and review. AWESOME! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, we thank you for your continued support. Your comments are so very true. Cathy is lucky to have the grandparents. Let's hope Bill is lucky, too, and gets away from that croc! Chapter 16 is already in the works, so stay tuned--it'll be coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful week. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Since this appears to be a romance, that extends the likelihood of a happily-ever-after. But scary times getting there.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Each chapter in this novel is better than the last one, Cathy and Bill. But together, they build a cohesive story that is filled with danger, love of family, intrigue, and great imagery. It is evident that much research has gone into this collaborative effort.
I enjoy the synopsis at the start of each chapter that serves to refresh my mind of the story thus far. The inclusion of the videos strengthens and grounds the time of this novel. They are great reminders of the state of society in many areas--music, natural surroundings, and the political focus. Johnny Cash was an awesome performer who set the standard with his style. The two videos detailing the Smoky Mountain sights/sounds are great for those who have not travelled to that area today OR did not know of the awesomeness of the area in 1964. Having Bill recall his training. and soon departure, for VietNam intensifies the political issue of that confrontation and sets the stage for more action from the war front.
The inclusion of Grandma and Grandpa keeps the 'down home' style evident that was so influential in Bill's early life. It allows Cathy to see how family was everything to Bill and still is! I love the inclusion of "Gandpaisms." Of course Grandma is never far behind with her wisdom--even if it is with a swift 'whoop' with her broom.
The parts Bill shared with Cathy were informative as to what he was preparing for and about to be involved in. The dialogue with his Commander showed the respect and camaraderie of the team members with each other. It sounded natural and added to the 'flavor' of the situation.
The phone call conversation with Cathy was heart tugging and heartfelt. Readers can feel the emotion, the longing, and the love each has for the other--particularly heart-wrenching were Bill's tears. He knows the upcoming danger, he knows how much he misses Cathy, and he knows things may not turn out a desired. That scene grabs readers like no other!
The cliff hangar did its job. It made me want to read the net chapter without delay! Thank you, Bill and Cathy, for another AWESOME chapter in this on-going novel.
Respectfully with Love, Laura Jan
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Each chapter in this novel is better than the last one, Cathy and Bill. But together, they build a cohesive story that is filled with danger, love of family, intrigue, and great imagery. It is evident that much research has gone into this collaborative effort.
I enjoy the synopsis at the start of each chapter that serves to refresh my mind of the story thus far. The inclusion of the videos strengthens and grounds the time of this novel. They are great reminders of the state of society in many areas--music, natural surroundings, and the political focus. Johnny Cash was an awesome performer who set the standard with his style. The two videos detailing the Smoky Mountain sights/sounds are great for those who have not travelled to that area today OR did not know of the awesomeness of the area in 1964. Having Bill recall his training. and soon departure, for VietNam intensifies the political issue of that confrontation and sets the stage for more action from the war front.
The inclusion of Grandma and Grandpa keeps the 'down home' style evident that was so influential in Bill's early life. It allows Cathy to see how family was everything to Bill and still is! I love the inclusion of "Gandpaisms." Of course Grandma is never far behind with her wisdom--even if it is with a swift 'whoop' with her broom.
The parts Bill shared with Cathy were informative as to what he was preparing for and about to be involved in. The dialogue with his Commander showed the respect and camaraderie of the team members with each other. It sounded natural and added to the 'flavor' of the situation.
The phone call conversation with Cathy was heart tugging and heartfelt. Readers can feel the emotion, the longing, and the love each has for the other--particularly heart-wrenching were Bill's tears. He knows the upcoming danger, he knows how much he misses Cathy, and he knows things may not turn out a desired. That scene grabs readers like no other!
The cliff hangar did its job. It made me want to read the net chapter without delay! Thank you, Bill and Cathy, for another AWESOME chapter in this on-going novel.
Respectfully with Love, Laura Jan
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Jan! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and detailed review. Wow! A BIG double "SALUTE!" We really appreciate your comments here. To say that the reader can feel the emotion is such a compliment. Thank you also for your continued support! It means so much to both of us. Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon, so stay tuned. Have a wonderful week! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Love,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ulla
This is a great new chapter. I sure hope he will be rescued before that gator gets him. Also, it appears that's she's pregnant. I'm looking forward to what's next. It's well written. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is a great new chapter. I sure hope he will be rescued before that gator gets him. Also, it appears that's she's pregnant. I'm looking forward to what's next. It's well written. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Ulla! We really appreciate your support, and we're glad you are continuing to follow along. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. To say it is well written means so much to us! Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful week! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sasha
This is an excellent chapter. It flowed smoothing, moved along at a fast pace. I am anxious to read the next chapter and find out if she is pregnant.... I hope he can come home to spend some time with her before he is deployed.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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This is an excellent chapter. It flowed smoothing, moved along at a fast pace. I am anxious to read the next chapter and find out if she is pregnant.... I hope he can come home to spend some time with her before he is deployed.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Sasha! So glad you found this chapter excellent! Thank you for reading and reviewing it. Also, thank you for your continued support. It means a lot to us! You won't have to wait long for the next chapter. It's already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a great week! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Thanks, I loved it and anxiously wait for the next installment.
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You are welcome.
