Blended Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Think twice"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
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Comment from Gail Denham
How often we ( I ) wish I hadn't said that - or perhaps we speak and do not mean anything bad, but it's misconstrued. Words do matter. In the Bible it talks about the tongue and the havoc it can cause.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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How often we ( I ) wish I hadn't said that - or perhaps we speak and do not mean anything bad, but it's misconstrued. Words do matter. In the Bible it talks about the tongue and the havoc it can cause.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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God gave us two ears and one mouth for a reason.
Comment from humpwhistle
If it has happened to you only twice, you're wise than I. My mouth tends to get me in trouble, even when I type.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
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If it has happened to you only twice, you're wise than I. My mouth tends to get me in trouble, even when I type.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
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Years and years of trial and error.
Comment from karenina
Been there and SOOOO regretted my impulsive nature! This little twenty nine word gem ought to be mandatory reading for the likes of me...that or some super glue applied instead of chapstick!--Karenina
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Been there and SOOOO regretted my impulsive nature! This little twenty nine word gem ought to be mandatory reading for the likes of me...that or some super glue applied instead of chapstick!--Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Ha,ha,ha....thank you
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LOL....you are SO welcome!---K
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a fun read, and I think many writers will be able to relate to the sentiment expressed. While it leaves a lot to the imagination of the reader -- for example, who is this person, and what has induced their loss of ability to express themselves? Panic? Embarrassment? Advancing years? -- that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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This is a fun read, and I think many writers will be able to relate to the sentiment expressed. While it leaves a lot to the imagination of the reader -- for example, who is this person, and what has induced their loss of ability to express themselves? Panic? Embarrassment? Advancing years? -- that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Good luck with the competition {smiles}.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this advice and should always take it, I have bitten my tongue recently and not said something I may regret and I am learning to keep my mouth shut! He he he, loved this write, love Dolly x
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I love this advice and should always take it, I have bitten my tongue recently and not said something I may regret and I am learning to keep my mouth shut! He he he, loved this write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
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Thanks Dolly, I have worked a lifetime on this issue....especially with my three adult children, ha, ha.
Comment from kahpot
Very well done with the use of so few words, those moments when our mouths take charge and amazingly beat our minds, I like the chosen artwork, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Very well done with the use of so few words, those moments when our mouths take charge and amazingly beat our minds, I like the chosen artwork, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well done for 29 words, everything is concise and well preserved "twice It has happened! The words were right there at the very tip of my tongue. Intuitively I knew, I should stop, swallow every word. Think about it twice." Good luck with the contest
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Well done for 29 words, everything is concise and well preserved "twice It has happened! The words were right there at the very tip of my tongue. Intuitively I knew, I should stop, swallow every word. Think about it twice." Good luck with the contest
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sallyo
A classic case of biting ones tongue. And a not so common case of successfully NOT blurting out the comment in question. Nowm how can I learn that? Better stufy the story again.
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A classic case of biting ones tongue. And a not so common case of successfully NOT blurting out the comment in question. Nowm how can I learn that? Better stufy the story again.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
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Thanks I have practiced a lifetime...
