You Entered My Heart
After the lonely years...12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like finding the correct soulmate, were you agree as one, hence the expression, "and the two shall become one flesh" . A beautifully written free verse that defines the wonder and mystery of finding one's destiny in a heaven sent partner. Beautifully written in articulate free verse, and a good entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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There's nothing like finding the correct soulmate, were you agree as one, hence the expression, "and the two shall become one flesh" . A beautifully written free verse that defines the wonder and mystery of finding one's destiny in a heaven sent partner. Beautifully written in articulate free verse, and a good entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review, Roy. I tried to make it feel like drawing closer to God also.
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Well done
Comment from tfawcus
A wonderfully sensitive poem about true love being found at last, after the passage of years and many disappointments. You express yourself poignantly in this.
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A wonderfully sensitive poem about true love being found at last, after the passage of years and many disappointments. You express yourself poignantly in this.
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your wonderfully sensitive review, Tony!