Fire & Ice
Loves extreme emotions...28 total reviews
Comment from Miles Connolly
I love the colors you chose in both the words and image, the image really helps us to see things from your perspective.
How could I know that the
fire you ignited
within my soul
would one day send
a breath of cold ice
into my heart.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I love the colors you chose in both the words and image, the image really helps us to see things from your perspective.
How could I know that the
fire you ignited
within my soul
would one day send
a breath of cold ice
into my heart.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your time and comment!
Comment from Mark D. R.
You created a sad ending for such a romantic-type poem. Do like your accompanying illustration and color choices. The yin-yang of love-hate is exemplified by your word-restricted contest entry. Interesting that the opposites: love and hate have four letters and frown and smile have the same number of letters.
My guess is that your entry will earn favorable reviews and votes.
Good luck (-:
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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You created a sad ending for such a romantic-type poem. Do like your accompanying illustration and color choices. The yin-yang of love-hate is exemplified by your word-restricted contest entry. Interesting that the opposites: love and hate have four letters and frown and smile have the same number of letters.
My guess is that your entry will earn favorable reviews and votes.
Good luck (-:
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your awesome comment! I never related the number of letters in those opposite words before! As they say, love is the opposite emotion of hate and you cannot fully experience joy if you have never experienced sorrow! Maybe one day the cycle will end in love and joy! xoxo
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And joy - sad too!
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Wow! Well now there?s a poem waiting to be written! xoxo
Comment from Lobber
Overall your use of color works.
I find that your allusion a bit difficult to understand
... your soul is ignited by a fire and then your soul (or is it the fire) breathes or sends you a "breath of cold ice" into your heart. ... all of this describes how "love" transforms into "hate". The conclusion, as I see it, is that love resides in the soul and hate comes from the heart....OR perhaps, the soul and heart are one...
Help! Get me out'a here!
- Lobber
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Overall your use of color works.
I find that your allusion a bit difficult to understand
... your soul is ignited by a fire and then your soul (or is it the fire) breathes or sends you a "breath of cold ice" into your heart. ... all of this describes how "love" transforms into "hate". The conclusion, as I see it, is that love resides in the soul and hate comes from the heart....OR perhaps, the soul and heart are one...
Help! Get me out'a here!
- Lobber
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Haha! I think you have it right with the last statement! Love penetrates the soul and hate comes back out through the heart! Thank you for stopping in leaving such an awesome comment. I greatly appreciate!
Comment from Sylvia Page
Yes, there is a fine line between love and hate. It can ignite with one harsh word, a regrettable offensive deed and or an action. You have crafted a clever poem here. Lots of images come to mind. Well done and best wishes!
Sylvia
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Yes, there is a fine line between love and hate. It can ignite with one harsh word, a regrettable offensive deed and or an action. You have crafted a clever poem here. Lots of images come to mind. Well done and best wishes!
Sylvia
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This entry is very alluring and well-written, wise and spot-on! The words alone are electric, but then you ramped it up with the variety of colors you used for the fonts and, of course, that way-steamy artwork. This definitely stands out from the crowd. I wish you good luck in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This entry is very alluring and well-written, wise and spot-on! The words alone are electric, but then you ramped it up with the variety of colors you used for the fonts and, of course, that way-steamy artwork. This definitely stands out from the crowd. I wish you good luck in the contest! xo
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you always! I?m so happy you enjoyed! xoxo
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Very much so. xo
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
The artwork you choose to go with your poem tells the complete story and they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to he last
I'm sure most members ,some time some wherein their life
had those same feeling.
thank IOU for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Wow!
The artwork you choose to go with your poem tells the complete story and they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to he last
I'm sure most members ,some time some wherein their life
had those same feeling.
thank IOU for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
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Your very welcome
cookie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Effective use of the required
words, excellent imagery,
and use of on continuous thought.
-I like how you weave the
words into a short poem that
tells a story, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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-Great artwork and
nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Effective use of the required
words, excellent imagery,
and use of on continuous thought.
-I like how you weave the
words into a short poem that
tells a story, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! I love it.
The words are powerful yet focused and perfectly complemented by the image.
Fire and ice is my favourite comparison and you have truly done it justice.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Wow! I love it.
The words are powerful yet focused and perfectly complemented by the image.
Fire and ice is my favourite comparison and you have truly done it justice.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your dramatic-clever poem and your exquisite selected photograph are contest winners. I love your excellent use of the words provided.
My best, Deborah
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Dear Author,
Your dramatic-clever poem and your exquisite selected photograph are contest winners. I love your excellent use of the words provided.
My best, Deborah
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is great. I don't even attempt to write anything for contests of this nature. I'm not talented enough. This is excellent. It's a great entry in the contest and should do very well in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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This is great. I don't even attempt to write anything for contests of this nature. I'm not talented enough. This is excellent. It's a great entry in the contest and should do very well in the voting booth.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you! I am honored by your appreciation! This is my first attempt at one like this!!! xoxo
