Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation, Kev.
-Did you take the picture?
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have used effective
nature imagery with the
bird, tree, and worms!
-You paint a picture of
the scene and have
a good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thanks Pam and no I did not take the picture even though I have some on file, I just couldn't get them to upload. Thanks also for your comments. Cheers, Kev.

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-May-2019

You are welcome, Kev. Were the pictures the right size for the site?
I think it is under 100 KB.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

What a pretty photo of the birds on the tree limb watching for their next meal. I perfectly matches the haiku.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
~dragonpoet

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thanks M8, much obliged for your review. Cheers, Kev.

reply by dragonpoet on 29-May-2019

You're very welcome, Kev.
Joan

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Your poem reminds me of an old song I learned when I was a little girl in grade school. It was called Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree. Anyway your poem reminded me of that. Very nice!

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thank-you so much for your feed back, much obliged. Cheers, Kev.

reply by Patty Palmer on 28-May-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I always enjoy watching the birds that frequent our bird baths. We do see quite a few kookaburras too. I don't have any suggestions but enjoyed reading your Haiku.

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thanks so much, Judy, value your perusal of my work.
Cheers, Kev.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This poem tells a message for living, when we search something by heart we get it as the prize; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thanks M8, much obliged. Cheers, kev.

Comment from A. Taylor

Good

Hi there,
Really sweet poem and I've never seen a kookaburra! The only thing I noticed is the poem isn't following the correct format 5/7/5 but you have time to fix it!

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 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Hi to you or should I say G'day. Thanks very much for reviewing.
I thought that this comp didn't have to follow a correct syllable count.
Cheers Kev

reply by A. Taylor on 28-May-2019

looks like you have it entered in a haiku contest? unless you meant to enter it into something else. Lovely either way 🤗

reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Ok I have changed it for better or worse. cheers Kev

Comment from Tootsie55

Excellent

This was good mate. Kooka on right looks browned off or needs a bath. I wish you well and I loved the photos and your layout was also really good. No spags. Check out sankey's (me) "Little Dog" biography Chapters for some funny money on Revive certificates.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thanks Muchly.